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Fantasy " Girls Hostel " { Completed }

harshit1890

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~~INDEX~~

Chapter 1 ~~ " Supriya "
Chapter ~~ 2 " The Illusion "
Chapter ~~ 3 " Catatonic Schizophrenia "
Chapter ~~ 4 " A True Face "
Chapter ~~ 5 " The Antiquarian "
Chapter ~~ 6 " The Amazon "
Finale
Chapter 7 : " Book Of Hoax "

Some Comments for this story :love: (Late Add-on :sigh:)

सच में , यह पुरी स्टोरी दिमाग के परखच्चे उड़ाए जा रही है । कभी लगता है कहानी में सस्पेंस है तो कभी लगता है भ्रम जाल का ताना-बाना बुना हुआ है तो कभी लगता है जैसे कोई रूहानी ताकतें हैं तो कभी लगता है यह सिंपल स्टोरी है जिसमें आरूहि एक गम्भीर बिमारी से पीड़ित है ।

मुझे लगता है इससे बेहतरीन कहानी फिलहाल तो इस फोरम पर नहीं है । और सबसे बड़ी खासियत है आपके लिखने का स्टाइल और अंदाज । आउटस्टैंडिंग हर्षित भाई ।
thoos thoos ke khana khaya aaruhi ne jo ekdam majedar horror type scene tha ..
सही में , हर्षित भाई ! मुझे बहुत ही दया आने लगा है आरूहि पर । अगर किसी हरामखोर की वजह से उसकी हालत ऐसी हुई है तो उसे जहन्नुम का रास्ता जरूर दिखला दिजियेगा ।
WTF!!! Yahi pehla reaction nikalta hai is kahani ko poora padhne ke baad... Halanki pehle bhi maine is kahani ke kuchh 7-8 updates padhe huye the par jab is baar padhna shuru kiya to ek naya sa romanch har beet te update ke saath banta gaya... Bohot hi zyada behatreen tareeke se likhi gayi kahani hai ye, ab jis prakaar ka plot imagine kiya hai lekhak saahab ne uske baad ek nausikhiya bhi likhe to bhi kahani halki nahi ho sakti, aur yahaan jis level ka narration, aur scene specialization hame padhne ko mila hai, wo kaafi hai dikhane ke liye that this is, without a doubt,one of the finest stories available on XF... Chahe wo running stories hon ya fir completed, aur chahe future mein likhi jaane waali kahaniyan, is story ka ek alag hi sthaan bana rehne waala hai forum par... Aur iske liye writer saahab ki jitni bhi tareef ki jaaye wo kam hi hogi...

Fantasy genre ke saath shuru huyi ye kahani, kab alag - alag genres ke darshan karane lagi padhte waqt katayi pata nahi chala... Horror, Suspense, Thriller, Adventure, Romance and of course Fantasy, aur saath hi mein Erotica ke ansh bhi... Ek story mein is se zyada kis cheez ki apeksha kar sakta hai reader!? Again, one of the best stories I've ever read... Outstanding Stuff harshit1890 bhai... :bow: :bow: :bow:
Kya hi khubsurat kahani likhi hai aapne bhai... I'm just speechless, jitni bhi tareef karunga kam hi hogi... Erotica ka bhi bilkul sahi situation mein use Kiya gaya hai aur sabse important har kirdaar par lekhak ki shaandar pakad bani rahi hai... Har character ka kahani mein hona justify kiya gaya hai, kahin bhi koyi bhi character bina matlab nahi ghus aaya...

Ab dekhna ye hai ke Mehta waali meeting mein kaun kaun shaamil tha aur unka maksad kya tha? Aur Shruti is sab ki sachayi jaan bhi paayegi ya nahi? Aruhi sach mein kisi beemari ka shikaar hai ya kewal naatak kar rahi hai? At last, Ek baar ko apun ko ye bhi laga ke asal mein ye sab jo ho raha hai wo kewal Shruti ki kalpana hai... :dazed:

Outstanding Story & Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...
Harshit bhai... Kayi horror stories padhi hain maine, joki poori tarah se horror genre par based hain but jis tarah ka scene aap create karte ho, taking into note ye story horror genre par based hai bhi nahi, that's phenomenal...
meghnath naam rakhne ke pichhe ki kahani bhi majedar hai 😍😍😍..
jab me TV nahi dekhta( waise tha nahi nahi ghar par ) tha bachpan me aur bas naam suna karta tha to khudko SHAKTI KAPOOR. kehta tha dosto ke bich 🤣🤣🤣..ye kissa padhke bachpan ki yaade taaza ho gayi 😍😍😍..
Slowly my interest is increasing towards the story full of adventure, fun to read, no doubt you are a great writer, thank you for writing such a beautiful story.
Have to admit, your story completely twists the thinking, sometimes it seems in the mind that it is just a disease and sometimes it seems like something supernatural. Your writing is commendable, even after writing this much there are many questions and there will be many such points which I have missed. In some scenes there was a combination of intensity as well as erotic scenes, which you have shown very well, what should I say now, now the words of praise are over understand my feelings.
harshit1890 Hats Off... enjoyed it. :applause:
but why were you making her nude everytime in front of everyone. :angry:
मुझे नहीं लगता दुनिया में कोई भी ऐसा माई का माल होगा जिसे इस कहानी की पहेली समझ में आ रही हो। गजब का दिमाग हिला रखा है आपने हर्षित भाई।
The whole incident, that Mansion one was written so beautifully that no words are sufficient to describe it! Ismein koyi doraye nahin ki maine aaj tak kisi ko bhi is tarah ka horror likhte nahi dekha hai... Haunted ko read kiya tha maine, kaafi pehle, aur main bilkul daave se keh sakta hoon, that you're the best,when it comes to generating real fear in readers, while they read the story..
Bhatt the phakk is this estory?:redface:
 
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apne pehle chumban mein darling... ab tu hi bata chumban chhodti ya phone uthati vo bhi hostel ke mess wala " megha palang par pasarte hue boli
Sala kahaniyon me bhi wande ho gaye :banghead:.... Hariya kaka jitni request ju ko kiya main utne main kisi se samne girgida leta to apan bhi photu photu khel raha hota... Kya hai bhagwan kyon in writers ko itna charecter me duba dete ho... Girls hotel ki jagah boys hostel likh rayle hote to na boys wali feeling rahti... Na ek gf dila do... Je Harshit bhai to pura lady charecter me dube bhav kha rahe :cry: :cry: :girlcry:
 

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jo ladke khade hai usme ho sakta hsi khandar ..par pehlewala hostel hi hai ..
Pahle wala wo devil gate ka extended roop hai..
Harshit bhai soche the ki devil gate 6 kamron ka hoga to rangarang maut ka kraykrm hoga... Budget dhila ho gaya aur saste hostel par jyada kharcha... Isliye ain mauke par devil gate Ramu kaka ke khet wale makan ko ghoshit kar diya gaya... Baki detail Harshit bhai denge...
 

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Sab ke sab wo bus stand ke par hakim rahmani ke add wale dialogue chenpa najar aa raha... :verysad: :dazed:
ise eersha kahte hai :D
 

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ise eersha kahte hai :D
Pahle mera "Masoom" ka tag chori kiya.. main chup...
Baad me mere comment karne ka pura satyle copy maar liya... Main chup...

Abhi sach baat bol raha to ershya ho gayi... Mujhe to lagta hai jo main sun raha hun tanu ka marna... Wo mujhe kisi ki ershya lag rahi aur sajis ke tahat writer ko 2000 pm thok kar usse raste se hatwa diya gaya hai... Isse alsli ershya kahte hain ...

Mastermind mister Harshit to kisi begunaah charecter ya bichare mar chuke soyi aatma ko tadapta hua bata'kar pura ilzam daal dene wale hain aur idhar asli sajiskarta nahi sajiskarti bach jayegi.... :bat: ... Bechari Tanu ko suhaagan hone ka sukh bhi nahib na hone diya... iss writer aur ershyalu ladki ne milkar game baja diya uska :sigh2:
 

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Pahle mera "Masoom" ka tag chori kiya.. main chup...
Baad me mere comment karne ka pura satyle copy maar liya... Main chup...

Abhi sach baat bol raha to ershya ho gayi... Mujhe to lagta hai jo main sun raha hun tanu ka marna... Wo mujhe kisi ki ershya lag rahi aur sajis ke tahat writer ko 2000 pm thok kar usse raste se hatwa diya gaya hai... Isse alsli ershya kahte hain ...

Mastermind mister Harshit to kisi begunaah charecter ya bichare mar chuke soyi aatma ko tadapta hua bata'kar pura ilzam daal dene wale hain aur idhar asli sajiskarta nahi sajiskarti bach jayegi.... :bat: ... Bechari Tanu ko suhaagan hone ka sukh bhi nahib na hone diya... iss writer aur ershyalu ladki ne milkar game baja diya uska :sigh2:
ju fikar nat, tharki komal aur Nashedi kaamini bhi tanu ke paas hi jaa rahi bahot jald :lol1: wo kya hai na upor jaake us tanu ko support deni hai na :popcorn: aur haan main sirf masoom reader hi nahi balki had se zyada masoom reader hoon.. nd masoomiyat se bhari mah revos :angel:
Hai na harshit1890 sahab :D
 
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Update ~~ 15

" aaahh.. maza aa gaya sala... tu bhi tanch maal hai.. ajay ko kab diya tha akhri baar "

" kal hi di thi salle ko apne doston se pelwana tha mujhe, lund par aisa katta ki abhi tak dard mein bilbila raha hoga madaharchod randi hi samajh liya hai mujhe " komal ne kaamini se cigratte chini aur bachi hui khinch kar use wahin kone mein fenk kar dhuain chhodne lagi.

" ye salle tatton ko bas ek baar chut mil jaye fir sochte hain us chut se vo kuch bhi kara le "

" tabhi mujhe ladkon se nafrat hai... ajay to majburi hai warna to... "

" aisi batein karke mahol ki maa mat chod varna mein tujhe chod dungi.. abhi to party hogi... behen ki lodiyun daruu laaoa darruu... aur is marau ko koi jagao " tanu ne kalyani ki chutadon par chapet lagate hue boli.

" iska muh baraf ke andar daal de abhi uchakegi ye... " komal ne payal ko idea diya aur payal use le gayi. Kaamini maal banane mein lagi thi aur tanu nachne mein. Nashe mein kisi ka dhayan hi nahi tha ki wahan unke alawa supriya bhi baithi hai aur unki harkat dekh rahi hai. Dusri taraf supriya bahar bhagna chahti thi lekin tanu, komal dono wahin gate ke samne nachne mein vyast thi. Dono kabhi ek dusre ke sharir ko bahon mein bhar kar dance karte to tanu kabhi uski chatiyun ko dabati hui horn bajati aur kabhi uski chutadon par thapad laga deti. Komal bich bich mein beer pii rahi thi aur fir kuch der baad payal kalyani ko lekar aa gayi jo use galiyan de rahi thi shayad payal ne wahi kiya tha jaisa use komal ne kaha tha.

" marau gand to matka kar dikha zara... " tanu ne uski gand par chapet lagate hue kaha aur payal ne beer uske muh mein thus di taki vo bak-bak band kar de.

" nangi hona hai to khul kar hoo.. fir dikhaungi matka kar " kalyani ko na jane kaun sa josh chada char ghunt beer ke bharne ke baad aur usne apni penty utari aur fir bra utar kar fenk di jo sidhe supriya ke samne giri aur is tarah marau yani kalyani nangi nachne lagi. Tangein khol kabhi apne mame dabati kabhi chutadon par hath rakh kar kamar idhar udhar ghumati. Baki ladkiyan hooting karti hui uske is nach ka anand utha rahi thi aur tanu bich bich mein sitti baja deti. Kaamini ne apna maal banaya aur sabse pehle tanu ki taraf badhaya. Tanu ne ek kasht liya aur kalyani ki taraf badhaya. Kalyani ne jhat se use pakda aur ek sath do-do kasht khinch gayi.

" chut mein se dhuain nikla lawdi.. chut mein se... hahaha.. " tanu uspar hanste hue cheekhi lekin kalyani ko farak na padh raha tha. Use is nashe ke aage sab bekar lag raha tha. Uske baad payal, komal aur fir kaamini ne ek ek kasht liya aur sabne usi ke uppar beer pii li. Ab nasha ek baar fir chadh gaya tha aur is tafri mein vo apna asli asar chhod raha tha. Achanak se nachte hue na jane kalyani ko kya hua vo tanu ki taraf lapki aur uske honton ko chumne lagi. Sabhi uski harkat par hooting karne lagee...aur vo aise paglon ki tarah tanu ke honth chusne lagi jaise vo uski sans hi rok legi.

" le madharchod... le... salle... mera baap hai na tu... de apna lund... mita le apni garmi.. yahi chahie tha na tujhe.... " kalyani ne honth chhode aur fir chusne lagi aur fir alag hui, " le dabba meri chatiyun ko kute ke pille yahi dekhta hai sara din.. ankhein behenke lode teri niche hi hoti hai ab daba inhe.. " usne tanu ka hath pakad kar apni chatiyun par rakh diya aur khud hi dabane lagi.

" is bitiyachod ko koi hatao ye mere ko kha rahi hai....hahaha... sali mein tera baap nahi hun... " tanu hanste hue boli.

" le lode.. lund de apna.. daal is chut mein... de naa.. kya hua bhosdiwalle... meri maa mein daal diya hai kya.. deta kyun nahi... " kalyani tanu ke pajame ke uppar se uski chut ko pakad kar bolne lagi.

" main tera baap nahi hun.. maaf kar.. maaf kar.. hahahahaha... " tanu pet pakad kar hans rahi thi. Payal ne use tanu se dur kiya aur kamar se pakad liya jiske baad dono ke bich hi chumma chatti shuru ho gayi. Jaise payal isi ka intezar kar rahi thi, dono ke honth jude hue the. Payal uski chatiyun ko dabate hue apna hath chut par le gayi aur use sehlane lagi.

" tu bahut sahi pakad kar layi hai is baar " tanu ne ishare se maal wala cigratte manga uski nazar abhi bhi dono par hi thi. Komal ne use cigratte apne kasht ke baad pakda di. Aur fir kaamini ne komal ko apni taraf ghuma kar apna muh uski chut ke uppar rakh diya aur uski penty ke uppar se hi use chumne lagi. " ise lund chusne ka shauk hai isliye mera lund samajh kar chusne mein lagi hai... " komal ne kaamini ke baal uske chehre se hatate hue kaha.

" tum sab ki sab randiyan ho, tumhare maa baap ko dikhaun ye sab to tatte gurdon mein fans jayenge sabke... " tanu ne hanste hue ek kasht khincha aur khinchte hue vo ruk gayi, jaise use kuch yaad aya. Vo turant piche mudi aur usne dhuain chhoda. Supriya kab se dekh rahi thi, sirf dekh rahi thi shant atma ban kar dekh rahi thi taki abhas tak na ho lekin shayad ab ho chala tha.

" fuck... ab gayi.. " usne man mein socha aur apne sharir ko aise kas liya mano uthegi nahi. Tanu uske pas ayi aur samne aa khadi hui. Suspriya ki ankhein uske chehre se takra rahi thi, Maal jal raha tha, supriya ko laga ki tanu abhi khinch kar use nanga karegi lekin aisa nahi hua, usne maal se bhari cigratte supriya ki taraf badhai. Supriya hairan pareshan kabhi us cigrate ko dekht kabhi tanu ko.

" lee.. " ishare se tanu ne kaha lekin supriya ne nah mein sar hila diya. Use laga vo maan jayegi lekin aisa nahi hua, tanu jhuki aur us cigrate ko uske muh mein thus diya. " mene kaha le to le.. jada buchati bani to tere ashiq ko bata dungi ki tu ladkiyun ki chut mein ungli karti hai, tujhe lund mein interest nahi hai. Fir aashiq kya pure hostel ki ladkiyan tujhse apni bur wali chut chatwayegi.. jitni senior hai jo lund nahi le sakti vo teri jeebh ka istemal karegi.. tu hostel ki kothe wali ban jayegi... har raat alag-alag kamre mein tera sej sajega jahan tu burchatti banegi.. samjhi... chal piii " tanu ne supriya ke baal khinchte hue kaha. Jo ladki kuch pal pehle hans rahi thi uske chehre par aseem gussa tha. Supriya dar ki wajah se mimiya kar hi reh gayi.

" piti hai ya fir meri chut se hi udghatan karegi... " tanu ke baal khinchne par supriya ko dard utha uppar se uski dhamki jo vo sach kar sakti thi us dar ki wajah se usne na chahte hue bhi kasht khincha aur halka sa khinchne par hi use khansi aa gayi lekin na to tanu ne cigratte hatai aur na khud hatti. Supriya ki ankhon se pani nikal aya aur usne fir kosish ki is baar jada ki aur kasht lete hi vo zor zor se khasne lagi jiske baad tanu ko hatna pada aur cigratte wahin gir kar palang ke niche chali gayi.

" madharchodd.. " tanu jhuk kar palang ke niche se cigratte khojne lagi. Par jo tanu chahti thi vo ho chuka tha, supriya ke dimag tak us nashe ka asar pahunch chuka tha. Khanste khanste uska sar ghumne laga aur sab kuch gol-gol ghumta hua dikhai dene laga. Usne apna sar pakda aur jab uthne ki kosish ki to whin dham se baith gayi. Samne ka nazara ghumta hua aur jitne bhi insan khade the vo sab use do-do dikhai de rahe the. Speaker se ati madhur awaz ek bhari awaz mein tabdeel ho gayi jaise koi uske sar ke andar dhol peet raha ho. Ek pal ke baad sari images badal gayi, speaker se atti ganne ki awaz band ho gayi, samne nangi khadi ladkiyan hath gayi, kamre ke andhera hath gaya. Image badal kar ayi jahan vo raveena ke sath kiss kar rahi thi itna hi nahi balki uske sath bistar par nangi laiti uski bahon mein lipti hui madhoshi ke alam mein khoi hui. Agle hi pal image badal gayi, bistar par sirf vo thi aur ankhein band kiye laite hue apne hath se apni chut masal rahi thi jaise pehli baar masal rahi ho, dhire-dhire bich bich mein tez sansein hoti aur hath khinch leti. Iske baad sab kuch badal gaya, palang, maa baap ke sath hanse wala manjar jo ek pal ke liye aya tha vo kho gaya aur sab kuch andhkar mein badal gaya, itna andhera ki use khud ke hath per tak nahi dikhai de rahe the. Vo kahan thi ye use malum nahi tha aur jor-jor se apne maa baap ko awaz laga rahi thi. Itni shanti thi us jagah ki uske rone ke sath tez chalti sans bhi jo bich-bich mein ukhad rahi thi, usi bich ek awaz ayi... " Aaruhi... " awaz ke baad kuch sunai nahi diya aur supriya ki ankhein khuli thi aur vo chatt ki taraf dekh rahi thi, sab kuch shant ho chuka tha.

" supriya... supriya.... supriyaa... uth.. supriyaa..... " gaal par pandrah bees thap-thapahat padne ke baad supriya ki ankh khuli, jisme abhi bhi dhundla pan tha. Supriya aise uth rahi thi mano gehri nind se bich mein jaga diya ho. Usne apni ankhon ko aur khola fir band kiya ki galon par padh rahi thap-thapahat ki wajah se fir khul gayi aur dhundla pan dhire-dhire hatne laga.

" megha.. " samne khadi megha ko dekhte hue vo boli aur fir ankhein saaf karne lagi. " tu yahan kaise.. kab " ubasi lete hue supriya boli.

" yahan sab kaise chhod tu bata tu yahan kya kar rahi hai tujhe mene.. "

" vo ... tera sara plan chopat ho gaya.. kal raat ko tanu ne mujhe dhund hi liya aur main uske kamre mein jaa pahunchi.. "

" kamre mein? tu kal raat uske kamre mein thi? " megha ne uska chehra uppar ki taraf uthaya jo nind ki wajah se jhukta jaa raha tha. " bolti kyun nahi.. kya kar rahi thi tanu ke kamre mein " is baar megha chikhi.

" thi thi kya kar rahi hai wahin to hun, tu subah subah kya bol rahi hai " is baar choti hi sahi puri tarah se ankh kholte hue supriya boli.

" tanu ke kamre mein? tu kya pagal ho gayi hai.. tu is waqt wahan hai jahan mene tujhe bheja tha kal raat par puri raat yahin pade rehne ke liye nahi.. "

" kya pagalon wali baat kar rahi hai main.. " supriya bas itna hi boli kyun ki uski nazar jab bagal ke pot par gayi aur khud ko usne deewar ke sahare baithe paya to uski sari nind tut gayi. Vo ek dum se khadi hui jisme use dikat hui par megha ki madad se vo khadi ho gayi.

" main yahan ..... " bathroom ke usi cucible mein khud ko pakar supriya hairani mein megha ki taraf dekhne lagi " main yahan kaise ayi megha.. main to tanu ke room mein thi kal raat ko "

" tu ye kya bol rahi hai supriya.. "

" main sach keh rahi hun, mere sath kal kuch ajeeb hua, yaad nahi aa raha kya hua tha lekin kuch ajeeb hua tha tabhi main tanu ke kamre mein jaa pahunchi thi ... par mujhe samajh nahi aa raha ki main yahan kaise ayi wapis.. "

" tu tanu ke room mein kaise jaa sakti hai, tujhe to yahan ana tha "

" han han ana tha lekin uske baad main tanu ke room mein hi thi "

" ssshhhhhhh muh band kar " megha ne supriya ka muh band kar diya aur tabhi piche se do ladkiyan apas mein baat karte hue bathroom se nikli jisme se ek abhi-abhi ayi thi dusri ke pas aur dono bahut jaldi mein wahan se nikal gaye the.

" muh band kar.. kal tu tanu ke kamre mein nahi thi samjhi " megha ne uske muh se hath hataya.

" tu pagal ho gayi hai kya.. main jab wahin thi to "

" kal raat tanu ka khoon ho gaya hai supriya.. " megha ke bolte hi supriya apna sentence complete kiye bina use ghurne lagi.
शायद तन्नु अपने मां बाप के महत्वाकांक्षी या दकियानूसी सोच की शिकार हो गई । कोई भी चीजें बेवजह नहीं होती है । आखिर क्या कारण था कि ये लड़कियां कालेज में आते ही नशे की आदी हो गई ! आखिर क्या वजह है इनकी लड़कों से नफरत करने की ! ये सभी लड़कियां समलैंगिक रिश्तों से क्यों जुट गई !

कुछ न कुछ तो कारण रहा ही होगा ।

मेधा की बातों को अगर सच मानें तो सुप्रिया रात को एक बजे से लेकर सुबह तक बाथरूम के कक्ष में थी और वो सपने देखते देखते वहीं सो गई ।
और अगर सुप्रिया के नजरिए से चलें तो बाथरूम में हुए अजीबोगरीब चीजों के बाद वो तन्नु के कमरे में थी ।

या तो मेधा गलत है या तो सुप्रिया ।
कहानी की नायिका सुप्रिया है तो हमें सुप्रिया की बातों को या उसकी सोच को ही सही मानना पड़ेगा ।

तन्नु की हत्या हो गई है.... ये सच हो सकता है पर उसकी हत्या क्यों हुई ?
क्या हास्टल की लड़कियों के साथ किया गया उसका गलत व्यवहार ! जिससे तंग आकर किसी लड़की ने उसकी हत्या कर दी ।
या सुप्रिया को फंसाने के लिए किसी ने उसकी हत्या कर दी है ।
या तन्नु के पास्ट से सम्बंधित कोई बात हो ।

चूंकि कहानी हर्षित भाई की है तो अभी बहुत सारी हत्याएं होने वाली है और सभी के तार आपस में कहीं न हो जुड़े हुए होंगे ।
और सुप्रिया इसकी सबसे महत्वपूर्ण कड़ी होने वाली है ।

बेहतरीन अपडेट हर्षित भाई ।
 
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