Fantasy " Girls Hostel " { Completed }

[harshit1890]

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Chapter 1 ~~ " Supriya "​

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Chapter ~~ 4 " A True Face "​

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Chapter ~~ 6 " The Amazon "​

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Finale Chapter 7 : " Book Of Hoax "​

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सच में , यह पुरी स्टोरी दिमाग के परखच्चे उड़ाए जा रही है । कभी लगता है कहानी में सस्पेंस है तो कभी लगता है भ्रम जाल का ताना-बाना बुना हुआ है तो कभी लगता है जैसे कोई रूहानी ताकतें हैं तो कभी लगता है यह सिंपल स्टोरी है जिसमें आरूहि एक गम्भीर बिमारी से पीड़ित है ।

मुझे लगता है इससे बेहतरीन कहानी फिलहाल तो इस फोरम पर नहीं है । और सबसे बड़ी खासियत है आपके लिखने का स्टाइल और अंदाज । आउटस्टैंडिंग हर्षित भाई ।

thoos thoos ke khana khaya aaruhi ne jo ekdam majedar horror type scene tha ..

सही में , हर्षित भाई ! मुझे बहुत ही दया आने लगा है आरूहि पर । अगर किसी हरामखोर की वजह से उसकी हालत ऐसी हुई है तो उसे जहन्नुम का रास्ता जरूर दिखला दिजियेगा ।

WTF!!! Yahi pehla reaction nikalta hai is kahani ko poora padhne ke baad... Halanki pehle bhi maine is kahani ke kuchh 7-8 updates padhe huye the par jab is baar padhna shuru kiya to ek naya sa romanch har beet te update ke saath banta gaya... Bohot hi zyada behatreen tareeke se likhi gayi kahani hai ye, ab jis prakaar ka plot imagine kiya hai lekhak saahab ne uske baad ek nausikhiya bhi likhe to bhi kahani halki nahi ho sakti, aur yahaan jis level ka narration, aur scene specialization hame padhne ko mila hai, wo kaafi hai dikhane ke liye that this is, without a doubt,one of the finest stories available on XF... Chahe wo running stories hon ya fir completed, aur chahe future mein likhi jaane waali kahaniyan, is story ka ek alag hi sthaan bana rehne waala hai forum par... Aur iske liye writer saahab ki jitni bhi tareef ki jaaye wo kam hi hogi...

Fantasy genre ke saath shuru huyi ye kahani, kab alag - alag genres ke darshan karane lagi padhte waqt katayi pata nahi chala... Horror, Suspense, Thriller, Adventure, Romance and of course Fantasy, aur saath hi mein Erotica ke ansh bhi... Ek story mein is se zyada kis cheez ki apeksha kar sakta hai reader!? Again, one of the best stories I've ever read... Outstanding Stuff harshit1890 bhai...

Kya hi khubsurat kahani likhi hai aapne bhai... I'm just speechless, jitni bhi tareef karunga kam hi hogi... Erotica ka bhi bilkul sahi situation mein use Kiya gaya hai aur sabse important har kirdaar par lekhak ki shaandar pakad bani rahi hai... Har character ka kahani mein hona justify kiya gaya hai, kahin bhi koyi bhi character bina matlab nahi ghus aaya...

Ab dekhna ye hai ke Mehta waali meeting mein kaun kaun shaamil tha aur unka maksad kya tha? Aur Shruti is sab ki sachayi jaan bhi paayegi ya nahi? Aruhi sach mein kisi beemari ka shikaar hai ya kewal naatak kar rahi hai? At last, Ek baar ko apun ko ye bhi laga ke asal mein ye sab jo ho raha hai wo kewal Shruti ki kalpana hai...

Outstanding Story & Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...

Harshit bhai... Kayi horror stories padhi hain maine, joki poori tarah se horror genre par based hain but jis tarah ka scene aap create karte ho, taking into note ye story horror genre par based hai bhi nahi, that's phenomenal...

meghnath naam rakhne ke pichhe ki kahani bhi majedar hai ..
jab me TV nahi dekhta( waise tha nahi nahi ghar par ) tha bachpan me aur bas naam suna karta tha to khudko SHAKTI KAPOOR. kehta tha dosto ke bich ..ye kissa padhke bachpan ki yaade taaza ho gayi ..

Slowly my interest is increasing towards the story full of adventure, fun to read, no doubt you are a great writer, thank you for writing such a beautiful story.

Have to admit, your story completely twists the thinking, sometimes it seems in the mind that it is just a disease and sometimes it seems like something supernatural. Your writing is commendable, even after writing this much there are many questions and there will be many such points which I have missed. In some scenes there was a combination of intensity as well as erotic scenes, which you have shown very well, what should I say now, now the words of praise are over understand my feelings.
harshit1890 Hats Off... enjoyed it.

but why were you making her nude everytime in front of everyone.

मुझे नहीं लगता दुनिया में कोई भी ऐसा माई का माल होगा जिसे इस कहानी की पहेली समझ में आ रही हो। गजब का दिमाग हिला रखा है आपने हर्षित भाई।

The whole incident, that Mansion one was written so beautifully that no words are sufficient to describe it! Ismein koyi doraye nahin ki maine aaj tak kisi ko bhi is tarah ka horror likhte nahi dekha hai... Haunted ko read kiya tha maine, kaafi pehle, aur main bilkul daave se keh sakta hoon, that you're the best,when it comes to generating real fear in readers, while they read the story..

Bhatt the phakk is this estory?

 

[Naina]

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Mene aaurhi ko kayi phone lagaye par usne nahi uthaya, class mein vo gayi nahi thi aur koi adhyapak class le raha tha jise mein dekh kar bahar se hi bahar ho gayi thi. Garmi puri thi badan pura ka pura pasine se bhar gaya tha use khojte hue. Jab vo mujhe building mein kahin nahi mili to socha hostel chali gayi hogi to mene bhi hostel jane ka faisla kiya. Ek hi to bed partner thi meri ab uska muh fulha tha to suljhana bhi mujhe hi tha. Main hostel ki taraf badhi aur tabhi meri nazar ek jagah jaa ruki. Kahan main aaruhi ko khojne mein vyast thi aur kahan vo alag hi zone mein thi. Mene bataya tha na hostel ke raste ke dayein aur bayein taraf ground hai jahan ek taraf football khela jata hai bas wahin aaurhi khadi thi ya pahunchi thi keh nahi sakti lekin uske pas ball ayi aur usne itni badia.. matlab itni zordar kick mari ball ko jaise koi bahut badi professional ho. Dil hi jeet liya ladki ne mera... main uski taraf daudi... " kya kick mari hai... " mene piche se atte hi use kaha. Samne khade ladkon ka chehra bhi dekhne layak tha.

" player reh chuki hun main... usi girls school mein jisko to gali deti hai " attitude jhalkate hue usne mujhse kaha.

" kya baat kar rahi hai.. tune ye to bataya hi nahi "

" abhi tujhe bahut kuch nahi pata.. football mera favorite sport nahi tha lekin apni friend ke chalte sikhne lagi aur fir dhire-dhire ruchi ane lagi game mein "

" yani tu aur teri friend champion the.. usne admission kyun nahi liya " mere sawal karte hi aaruhi ke chehre par attitude ki jagah dukh aa gaya.

" she is no more.. "

" oooh... sad.. kya naam tha uska "

" kyun? tujhe kyun janna hai? "

" for her memory... "

" Nimi" aaurhi ke sath main bhi kuch der yun hi khadi rahi. Mujhe aisa laga jaise khas saheli thi vo uski school ke dauran aur uppar se football mein ruchi lane wali saheli bhi " Nimisha tha pura naam uska "

" death reason? " maine pucha par aaruhi ne koi jawab nahi diya aur vo hostel ki taraf chali gayi. Mene use nahi roka aur khud college aa gayi, baki class lene. Aaruhi meri room partner thi jada jana nahi tha use, vo kuch alag thi ya aisi hi thi abhi samjhne mein time lagne wala tha, kabhi vo bahut jada bold ho jati thi aur kabhi itni sidhi ki samajh nahi ata ki wahi hai. Samajh pana use mushkil tha, ye mujhe pehle din hi malum ho gaya tha isliye mujhe uske alawa kuch aur logon ko apni life mein dalna jaruri tha.. isi liye mene us din wo bhi kiya. Class lena bahana tha, bich mein vishal ko tadne ka kaam bhi karna tha taki use aabhas bhi rahe aur sath hi sath confuse bhi, jise uska dimag kisi aur ladki par bhi na jaye aur mujhse baat karne ki himmat bhi na ho. Yahi to hum ladkiyun ka prakop tha is dharti par ki hum ladkon ko kisi bhi tarah majbur karke use deliberately confuse kar sakte the. Mujhe wahi karna tha vishal ke sath jisme mujhe kamyambi milni hi thi. Par in sab ke bich bhi aaruhi mujhse dur nahi ho rahi thi aur na hi main use dur kar paa rahi thi. Par us pehle din ke baad takreeban do din tak uske aur mere bich na ke barabar hi baat hui. Aisa lagne laga tha ki vo mujhse baat nahi karna chahti lekin vajah kuch aur thi jise janne mein mujhe kafi samay lag gaya.

Shruti ko rukna pada kyun ki jis kamre mein aaruhi thi wahan se kuch awaz aa rahi thi. Uske sath sath sabhi ki nazre kamre ki taraf mudi jiske bheetar aaruhi ko sulaya gaya tha. " lagta hai aaruhi ko hosh aa gaya hai " nandini sabse pehle kamre ki taraf badhi, shruti mana karti use pehle usne gate khol diya. Nandini ke piche vishal aur shruti aa khade hue, gaggan dur se hi dekhna pasand kar raha tha. Par andar se aa rahe shor ki koi bhi wajah unhe kamre mein nahi dikhai de rahi thi. Aaruhi abhi bhi bistar par hi laiti hui thi aur behosh thi.

" awaz kaise aa rahi thi andar se vo bhi aisi "

" jaise koi chal raha ho.. " shruti ne baat puri ki.

" han.. lekin yahan to aaurhi to uthi hi nahi hai. Hume doctor ko bulana chahie, kab tak aise behosh rahegi ye, kuch ho gaya to musibat tum sab ke sath mujhpar bhi ayegi, akkhir is waqt responsible person main hi hun.. mujhe Dr Guzral ko phone karna chahie " nandini bol kar wahan se nikalti shruti ne use rok liya.

" miss.. meri baat suniye.. uski koi jarurat nahi hai.. "

" shruti main tum logon par trust nahi kar sakti. Aaruhi ko kuch ho gaya to samsya badh jayegi.. tum log baarish mein bhige ho... kahin fever badh gaya ya nimonia ho gaya to, i can't risk her life "

" miss aisa kuch nahi hoga "

" tum itna sure kaise ho? "

" kyun ki miss aaruhi behosh nahi hui hai vo soo rahi hai.. vo nahi uthegi.. "

" nahi uthegi? kyun.. aur tumhe kaise pata nahi uthegi "

" kyun ki vo nahi uthti.. mene apko bataya ki pehle din kaise mene use uthaya itna hi nahi jo main apko abhi batane jaa rahi thi uske piche ki wajah bhi yahi hai. Jo awazein apne suni vo main bhi raat mein suna karti thi lekin kamre mein aaruhi soyi milti thi aur wahan koi nahi hota tha "

" mene kaha tha.. aaurhi mein koi bhoot pret atma chipki hai... " gaggan fauran bol pada.

" gaggan please stop.. tum mere sath bahar aao.. " nandini kamre se bahar nikli aur darwaja laga diya. Bahar abhi bhi bizli kadak rahi thi aur baarish ki gatti utni hi tez thi. Lub jub karti light ye bata rahi thi ki voltage ki gadbadi se kabhi bhi vo band ho sakti hai.

" shruti tum ye kehna cha rahi ho ki aaruhi jabse tumhare sath ayi hai use nind jada ati hai jiski wajah se tumne abhi kaha ki vo behosh nahi hui hai? "

" ji miss "

" aur agar tum galat hui to? "

" ho sakti thi, par miss jab se mene use purane hostel mein ate jate dekha hai tabse main apko jo bata rahi ho wo ek dum sahi hai.. Aaruhi vo nahi hoti jo dikhti hai... aur iske piche meri bhi jimmewari hai. Lekin main nahi janti thi ki aisa kuch hoga.. "

" aisa kya hua tha shruti.. mujhe abhi bhi tumhari kahani se kuch samajh nahi aya hai "

" nahi ayega miss.. kyun ki kahani abhi shuru hui hai.. vaise to college mein bahut si chizen hui aur hoti hai, par ye vakya shayad har college mein nahi ghatta. Takreeban hafta beet gaya, aaruhi se is dauran baat cheet kam hui. Vo college se hostel jaldi chali jati aur pure din college mein bhi chup-chup si rehti. Mene baat karne ki kayi dafa kosish ki lekin usne dhang se response nahi diya. Mujhe laga ki vo mere uski mom ke uppar kiye gaye mazak se naraz hai lekin aisa hota to vo kuch kehti, bolti bhi.. aur us din football ground ke pas mujhe jawab bhi nahi deti. Par sochti thi ki college na sahi hostel mein use baat kar lun lekin jab bhi jati vo sirf soti hi milti, usne ek hafte se raat ka khana tak nahi khaya tha. Situation mere control mein nahi thi aur mujhe laga ki vo apni hi dunia mein rehne wali ladki hai shayad girls school mein padne wale bache aise hi hote hai lekin dusri taraf mujhe aisa lagne laga ki uske past mein kuch chizen achi nahi hui hai jiski wajah se vo ghar se itni dur ayi aur shayad usi ka asar uske dimag par padh raha hai. Hafta guzar gaya, mujhe laga har din ki tarah aaruhi aaj bhi jaldi jakar so rahi hogi lekin aisa nahi tha, us din vo soyi nahi thi balki naha rahi thi aur ye baat mujhe tab pata chali jab mein apne floor par pahunchi "

" Corridor mein itna pani ? koi hai nahi kya.. " pani dhire-dhire aage badh raha tha jaise mene titanic movie mein dekha tha. " kisi ka leak ho gaya lagta hai.. " aage badh kar mene apna kamra khola tab samajh aya ki leakage apne hi kamre ke bathroom se hi tha. Peron mein pani ki chinta aur kamre ka saman jo zameen par pada tha sab pani se gila ho gaya tha. " aaruhi kamre mein nahi dikh rahi, kahin usne bathroom mein suicide to nahi kar liya... are aaruhi... " mene darwaje par dhakka mara aur vo khula nahi " kundi laga kar mar gayi... " mene zor se darwaje par dhakka mara aur andazan choti si jo kundi lagi thi jo ki already itni dhili padi thi ki vo asasni se tut gayi aur darwaja khul gaya. Darwaja khulte hi jo socha tha uska ulat hua, aaruhi samne nangi khadi thi aur shower se pani uske uppar gir raha tha.

" aaruhi... " mene awaz lagai lekin usne koi response nahi diya. Pani bharne ka karan aaruhi thi ye baat tab samajh ayi jab dekha ki nali mein pani jaa nahi raha hai aur uski wajah se pure floor par pani bhar gaya. Mene turant shower band kiya, aaruhi abhi bhi waisi hi khadi thi. Baal bhig kar uske chehre ko dhak rahe the lekin uske baal itne lambe the ki uske sine se lekar niche pet ke niche tak aa rahe the. Ek pal khamoshi mein main usko dekhti rahi, shower se band pani ki bundon ka shor mehsus karti rahi. Aisa laga jaise aaruhi sans hi nahi le rahi hai. " aaruhi.. " mene uske kandhe par hath rakha aur jaise hi use mere hathon ka sparsh hua vaise hi uske sharir mein harkat hui aur usne apni ankhein kholi jo ki mujhe nahi dikh rahi thi. Usne fauran mera hath pakda jiske pakadne ke baad mujhe abhas hua ki vo puri tarah se hosh mein aa chuki hai.

" shruti tu... yahan kaise " aaruhi ke honth jo bich ka hissa hi dekh paa rahi thi usme se awaz nikli to apni mumy ki kasam ek ajeeb si sirhan daudh gayi.

" main kya.. thodi der baad har koi aa jata "

" matlab "

" aaruhi pani nali mein nahi jaa rha aur pure hostel mein bhar gaya "

" pani ? " vo abhi tak confuse sound ho rahi thi.

" han ... tu naha rahi hai na " mere kehte hi usne mera hath chhoda aur apne chehre se baal hataye aur idhar udhar dekha. Jaise janne ki kosish kar rahi ho ki vo kahan hai. " main naha rahi hun... " vo kuch soch mein padi " fuckk... yani mene kapde nahi pehne... tu mujhe kab se nanga hi ghur rahi hai... tu kitni jadi haramzadi hai " usne fauran apna sharir chupane ki kosish ki.

" wah kya zamana hai, abhi agar main nahi ayi hoti to tujhe hostel ki sari ladkiyan aisi nangi dekh rahi hoti... neki kar aur bhosde mein maal wali baat hai ye to "

" kya? "

" pura pani pani kar diya ab kya karein... "

" tu pehle mera towel de "

" kya karegi janeman aise hi reh le " main use chedne ke liye aage badi to vo wahan se bhagi. Use bhagta dekh mera dhayan pehli dafa uske jism par gaya, apni chupati chatiyan jo hilte hue dikh rhi thi aur fir piche se uske nitamb... sahi mein mere se jada sundar hai ye ladki.. gori chitti fluffy si... jo bhi ladka lega ... kya lega vo... wah.. Main bahar nikli aaruhi apna badan chupate hue kapde pehnne lagi thi. Main wahin bistar par jaa baithi, pani farsh par abhi bhi maujud tha bas ab badh nahi raha tha.

" warden hostel se nikal degi ... shit.. main to gayi... ab nahi chhodegi vo... " main use baithe dekh rahi thi aur vo bad-badh kiye jaa rahi thi. Kapde pehne ke baad usne farsh par pade pani ko dekhti aur fir mujhe dekhti. " tune mujhe bataya kyun nahi "

" kya nahi bataya? "

" yahi ki pani nahi jaa raha shower band kar "

" kamal hai.. mujhe kya sapne aa rahe the ki tu naha rahi hai aur nali mein pani nahi jaa raha hai. Main to ayi college se tab dekha ki tu kamre mein nahi hai bathroom ka darwaja band hai. Mujhe to laga tu gayi "

" gayi kahan ? "

" vo sab chhod.. tu itna naha kyun rahi thi ye bata.. koi purani hindi movie dekhi kya? "

" purani hindi movie kahan se ayi.. "

" are isliye kyun ki jis tarah un movies mein dikhate the ki jab-jab ladkiyan muh kala karti thi to jakar nahati thi.. aur nahati hi jati thi... isliye pucha... kahin tera bhi to? " mene apni baat bich mein roki aur kisi tarah hansi rok kar rakhi.

" tera dimag theek hai... main yahan musibat mein hun aur tujhe mast sujh rahi hai " usne jaise hi meri masti pakdi meri hansi nahi ruki. " kutiya.. haramzadi.. kamini.. tujhe to maa behen ki galiyan dene ka man karta hai... pata nahi kis manhus ghadi mein tujhse pala pada... " aaruhi pareshan hote hue boli. " tujhse to baat karna bekar hai tum jaisi ladkiyan sirf apne liye hoti ho.. school ki bhi aisi hi thi tu bhi wahi hai... " bol kar vo khud se baat karne lagi " pani kaise nikalun... koi kapda leti hun usme pani bhar kar nichod kar washbasin mein dalti hun.. han ye sahi rahega.. "

" sun.. " vo itni mehnat karti mene awaz mari.

" dekh shruti mere pas time pass ka bilkul bhi time nahi hai sach keh rahi hun.. "

" tu yahan kamre mein nahi thi aur tujhe nahi pata kisne nal khula chhoda tu sahi samay par ayi aur tune nal band kiya... warna pani niche floors tak pahunch jata, tujhe kuch pata hi nahi " ek minute vo mujhe ghurti rahi.

" kehna kya chahti hai? "

" Yahi tujhe warden se kehna hai, waise bhi kamre thodi na lock hote hain aur uppar koi cctv bhi nahi hai... kisi ko kya pata kisne khola... hum to college mein padh rahe the na... " mene muskurate hue jawab diya. Ek pal vo sochti rahi aur usne meri baat ko dimag mein repeat kiya hoga jo ki karte hi vo samajh gayi.

" lekin agar warden ko ye pata chala ki main class mein nahi thi balki yahan thi fir... unhone attendance check kara li to "

" proxy meri janeman.. proxy.. pichle hafte bhar se main tumhari proxy hi lagwa rahi hun " main aram se piche laitte hue boli. Vo mujhe khadi dekhti rahi.

" to fir ab? "

" Ab bas 5 minute baad wahi karna hai jo mene abhi kaha.... "

Warden ko batai hui kahani sahi lagni hi thi uske pas hamare khilaf koi sabut thodi tha jo hum par action karti. Pani ruk jana hamare hath mein nahi tha aur itna pani bhar kar kaun nahata hai. Warden ne kaam hostel ke peon ko de diya tha jo uska behad khas tha. Ek number ka ladkibaaz, kamina admi tha jo hostel ki sari batein warden ko jakar batata tha aur ladkiyun se batein chupane ke liye unse kuch na kuch manga karta tha. Itna tak suna hai mene ki usme vo ladkiyun ki chadiyan, unki bra... aur kayi baar to vo unke live show bhi dekha karta tha.. ab ye usne kis kis ke sath kiya tha abhi tak uski khabar nahi hui thi. Hum dono warden ke room mein uske samne khade the.

" debu... pani saaf ho gaya.. "

" ji madam "

" pani kyun ruka hai? "

" abhi nahi pata madam.. par bathroom band kar diya hai kuch din ke liye jab tak theek nahi hota "

" acha.. theek hai tu jaa.. " warden ne debu ko jane ka ishara kiya. Sala bangali jatte-jatte meri aur aaruhi ki gand ko tadta hua gaya... iski harampanti ki bitte dino bahut kahani suni thi mene.

" aur tum dono.. " mene apni nazre samne ki. Warden jitni khatarnak sunai gayi thi vo utni hi thi, pehle din hi dekh kar pata lag gaya tha use. Hasth pusht to nahi thi vo lekin thi to vo bhi bangali hi full tez thi chaal bazz aurat thi. Pati se divorce karne ke baad uska adha maal andar kiya aur yahin college ke pas apartment lekar rehne lagi. Dikhne mein theek thaak thi, umar bhi 42-43 ki thi lekin jallad jaise swaroop iski kundli bana kar gaya ho aise sabhav ki thi. Bolti kam apni baton se marti jada thi. Pura hostel kabza rakha tha aur har koi darta tha sivai ek ke... lavanya.. uska bol-bala yahan bhi tha aur usi ke chalte uski chamchiyan bhi bachi rehti thi varna ye aur iska debu.. dono akele mein kya karte the nahi malum lekin hostel ki ladkiyun ke liye kafi the.

" tum dono complaint box mein koi complain mat dalna.. main bathroom sahi kara dungi.. "

" ji madadm " aaruhi ne bas itna hi kaha aur hum dono wahan khade rahe. Ab kya karein jab tak jane ke liye nahi kahegi jaye kaise.. mene to ishare se aaruhi ko kaha bhi par vo nahi hili.

" machii khayegi? " warden ne apni nazar uppar uthate hue kaha. Humne fauran na mein sar hilaya " to jao yahan kyun khade ho.. bola to ho jayega kaam.. ab kya mein nalli mein hath dalun? niklo " usne itna kaha aur hum bahar ki taraf nikal aye.

" kitni haramkhor warden hai.. non-veg hostel mein allowed nahi hai par khud machhii kha rahi hai.. matlab uske dharam mein hai to bhale hi vo machi tang kar nangi pure hostel mein ghume usko allowed hai par hume nahi.. "

" tu dhire bol sun liya kisi ne to bawal ho jayega "

" bawal se yaad aya.. aaj ke khane mein kya bana hoga.. bas kal ki tarah panner ki sabzi na ho "

" kyun panner ki sabzi mein aisa kya tha "

" are puch mat.. lambi kahani hai.. tu chal tujhe uppar pahunchte pahunchte batati hun.. "

Thodi bahot situation mein changes hai megha aur supriya ki kahani se baaki naam alag alag jo bhi kirdaar aa rahe hai story mein... lekin baaki sab wohi ka wohi...
yahan pe kuch sawal aise bhi hai jaise
1) supriya aur megha ke room se aawaze aati thi....... par raat ko teen baje baad.. Lekin yahan to 3 baje se pehle hi kisi ke chalal kadmi ki awaze aa rahi hai wo itne log ki maujudgi mein.... aur sabse badi chounkane wali baat ye ki ye log us awaz ko nazar andaz kar flashback sunne mein busy ho gaye.... kyun?

3) bathroom mein aaruhi ki aawaz sun do pal ke liye dar gayi thi shruti.... ye bhi nayi ghatana add huyi kahani mein... aaruhi ki aawaz badalke baat kar rahi thi kuch pal ke liye.. matlab saaf hai aaruhi aane se pehle wo apni dusri personality mein jee rahi thi...

4)ek aur nayi baat samne aayi hai.. aaruhi us bhootiya hostel jaane ke piche shruti ka bhi hath hai... ek aham bhumika hai... aur ye baat usne swikar ki hai abhi abhi nandu aur baaki sab ke samne....
lekin kyun..

5) ek aur nayi baat jaan ne ko mili hai.. aaruhi ki gahri nind.... supriya ke waqt ye baat jikar nahi huyi thi... ab ye gahri nind hai ya phir kuch aur ye to aaruhi hi jaane

6) aaruhi badbada rahi thi ki school time mein koi thi jo bilkul matlabi thi... Koun thi wo...
Nimi?

Khair.... kadi se kadi tabhi mile jab ek kadi mile yahan to puri kahani hi idhar se udhar jump maar rahi hai sabhi kirdaaro ke sath...

anyway
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Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills harsit saheb

 

[Naina]

Intezaar........

 

[Naina]

The king plz read this story . pure 101% thrill + suspense +Fantasy

Ek baar Dar kise kehte usse ru ba ru hoke dekho

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

यहां भी बाथरूम में प्रोब्लम ! यहां भी बाथरूम के नाले से पानी निकलने में प्रोब्लम ! क्या चक्कर है इस बाथरूम का ? सुप्रिया के लम्बे लम्बे बालों के झडने से नाला जाम हो जाता था पर यहां क्या प्रोब्लम है पानी निकासी में ?
आरोही बाथरूम में स्टैच्यू की तरह नंगी खड़ी हो कर नहा रही थी और श्रुति के पुकारने पर उसकी तंद्रा भंग हुई थी । क्यों ? वो क्या सोच रही थी ? वो अचेतन अवस्था में क्यों थी ?

आकाश के बदले विशाल की एंट्री हुई । बाकी सब कुछ वैसा ही चल रहा है जैसे सुप्रिया वाले कांड में चल रहा था । वार्डन और उसका ठोकु यहां भी वैसे ही जलवे बिखेर रहे हैं । बिल्कुल टु काॅपी ।

इंजीनियरिंग कॉलेज में सप्लाई और डिमांड की बातें देखकर तो मैं कंफ्यूज हो गया था । मुझे लगा यहां इकोनोमिक्स की भी पढ़ाई होने लग गई है क्या ?
ये भी सही लिखा आपने कि मैकेनिकल इंजीनियरिंग में लड़कियों की संख्या बहुत कम है । आजकल तो अधिकांशतः लड़कियां आई टी या कम्प्यूटर साइंस में ज्यादा जाती हैं । वैसे इंजीनियरिंग के कोर सब्जेक्ट में इलेक्ट्रॉनिक और मेकेनिकल ही सबसे अधिक इम्पोर्टेंट है । इसके बाद इलेक्ट्रिकल और सिविल का नम्बर आता है ।
बहुत सोच समझकर श्रुति ने मैकेनिकल इंजीनियरिंग के स्टूडेंट विशाल का चुनाव किया है । सच में काफी इंटेलिजेंट छोकरी है ।
श्रुति का कैरेक्टर बहुत ही जबरदस्त बिल्ड अप किया है हर्षित भाई आपने । इसके डायलॉग तो सच में लाजवाब है ।

सभी अपडेट्स बेहद ही शानदार थे । जगमग जगमग अपडेट हर्षित भाई ।

 

[harshit1890]

Laptop khrab ho gaya mera, lockdown mei koi mil bi nai raha theek krne ko, kya krun mei

Kahani usi mei pdi hai, jab theek hga tb aaunga is gariib ke laptop ki prathna kre ki vo jaldi maran stihti se uth kr khda ho jaye

 

[Naina]

Laptop khrab ho gaya mera, lockdown mei koi mil bi nai raha theek krne ko, kya krun mei

Kahani usi mei pdi hai, jab theek hga tb aaunga is gariib ke laptop ki prathna kre ki vo jaldi maran stihti se uth kr khda ho jaye

Aji char botal vodka pila dijiye lappy ko... phir dekhiye laptop chalega nahi balki doudega

 

[harshit1890]

Aji char botal vodka pila dijiye lappy ko... phir dekhiye laptop chalega nahi balki doudega

Nahi madamji vodka se nai uth raha. Uska brain freeze ho gaya hai, he is in coma. Ab surgery ke liye item mangwai hai lekin lockdown mei uplabhdh nai hai isliye 1 hafta tak na chahte hue bi use mjhe coma mei chhodna pdh rha hai. Jaise hi brain ka purja mil jayega hum apne sang sathi ke sath jald lautenge.. Alvida na kehna dost...

Jokes apart, request to everyone, please be safe and avoid leaving home until is necessary. Covid is out of control in this part of the world. Be safe and keep ur family too.. jaldi lautunga..

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

Nahi madamji vodka se nai uth raha. Uska brain freeze ho gaya hai, he is in coma. Ab surgery ke liye item mangwai hai lekin lockdown mei uplabhdh nai hai isliye 1 hafta tak na chahte hue bi use mjhe coma mei chhodna pdh rha hai. Jaise hi brain ka purja mil jayega hum apne sang sathi ke sath jald lautenge.. Alvida na kehna dost...

Jokes apart, request to everyone, please be safe and avoid leaving home until is necessary. Covid is out of control in this part of the world. Be safe and keep ur family too.. jaldi lautunga..

आज रोहित सरदाना की भी मौत हो गई । बहुत ही कठीन परिस्थितियां है । कई लोग मर रहे हैं और समस्या दिन प्रतिदिन बदतर होती जा रही है ।
सिर्फ एक आदमी के चलते पहले अर्थ व्यवस्था तहस नहस हुई और अब लोगों की जान जा रही है ।
लेकिन लोग करें भी तो क्या करें ! किस से आस रखें ! सभी तो एक ही समान है । सभी को टेस्ट कर लिया , कोई भी कसौटी पर खरा नहीं उतरा ।

 

[harshit1890]

आज रोहित सरदाना की भी मौत हो गई । बहुत ही कठीन परिस्थितियां है । कई लोग मर रहे हैं और समस्या दिन प्रतिदिन बदतर होती जा रही है ।
सिर्फ एक आदमी के चलते पहले अर्थ व्यवस्था तहस नहस हुई और अब लोगों की जान जा रही है ।
लेकिन लोग करें भी तो क्या करें ! किस से आस रखें ! सभी तो एक ही समान है । सभी को टेस्ट कर लिया , कोई भी कसौटी पर खरा नहीं उतरा ।

Baat sahi hai bhai apki lekin jab insan kursi ke piche lalsa ho jaye to use dhakka de dena chahie. Sab same hai lekin inhe badalte rehna chahie ek ko de do to inhe lagta hai yahi bhagwan hai.

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

Baat sahi hai bhai apki lekin jab insan kursi ke piche lalsa ho jaye to use dhakka de dena chahie. Sab same hai lekin inhe badalte rehna chahie ek ko de do to inhe lagta hai yahi bhagwan hai.

सही कहा आपने भाई । परिवर्तन हमेशा होते रहना चाहिए नहीं तो नेताओं में डिक्टेटर की भावना आ जाती है ।