Fantasy " Girls Hostel " { Completed }

[harshit1890]

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Chapter 1 ~~ " Supriya "​

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Chapter ~~ 3 " Catatonic Schizophrenia " ​

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Chapter ~~ 4 " A True Face "​

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Chapter ~~ 5 " The Antiquarian "​

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Chapter ~~ 6 " The Amazon "​

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Finale Chapter 7 : " Book Of Hoax "​

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Some Comments for this story (Late Add-on )

सच में , यह पुरी स्टोरी दिमाग के परखच्चे उड़ाए जा रही है । कभी लगता है कहानी में सस्पेंस है तो कभी लगता है भ्रम जाल का ताना-बाना बुना हुआ है तो कभी लगता है जैसे कोई रूहानी ताकतें हैं तो कभी लगता है यह सिंपल स्टोरी है जिसमें आरूहि एक गम्भीर बिमारी से पीड़ित है ।

मुझे लगता है इससे बेहतरीन कहानी फिलहाल तो इस फोरम पर नहीं है । और सबसे बड़ी खासियत है आपके लिखने का स्टाइल और अंदाज । आउटस्टैंडिंग हर्षित भाई ।

thoos thoos ke khana khaya aaruhi ne jo ekdam majedar horror type scene tha ..

सही में , हर्षित भाई ! मुझे बहुत ही दया आने लगा है आरूहि पर । अगर किसी हरामखोर की वजह से उसकी हालत ऐसी हुई है तो उसे जहन्नुम का रास्ता जरूर दिखला दिजियेगा ।

WTF!!! Yahi pehla reaction nikalta hai is kahani ko poora padhne ke baad... Halanki pehle bhi maine is kahani ke kuchh 7-8 updates padhe huye the par jab is baar padhna shuru kiya to ek naya sa romanch har beet te update ke saath banta gaya... Bohot hi zyada behatreen tareeke se likhi gayi kahani hai ye, ab jis prakaar ka plot imagine kiya hai lekhak saahab ne uske baad ek nausikhiya bhi likhe to bhi kahani halki nahi ho sakti, aur yahaan jis level ka narration, aur scene specialization hame padhne ko mila hai, wo kaafi hai dikhane ke liye that this is, without a doubt,one of the finest stories available on XF... Chahe wo running stories hon ya fir completed, aur chahe future mein likhi jaane waali kahaniyan, is story ka ek alag hi sthaan bana rehne waala hai forum par... Aur iske liye writer saahab ki jitni bhi tareef ki jaaye wo kam hi hogi...

Fantasy genre ke saath shuru huyi ye kahani, kab alag - alag genres ke darshan karane lagi padhte waqt katayi pata nahi chala... Horror, Suspense, Thriller, Adventure, Romance and of course Fantasy, aur saath hi mein Erotica ke ansh bhi... Ek story mein is se zyada kis cheez ki apeksha kar sakta hai reader!? Again, one of the best stories I've ever read... Outstanding Stuff harshit1890 bhai...

Kya hi khubsurat kahani likhi hai aapne bhai... I'm just speechless, jitni bhi tareef karunga kam hi hogi... Erotica ka bhi bilkul sahi situation mein use Kiya gaya hai aur sabse important har kirdaar par lekhak ki shaandar pakad bani rahi hai... Har character ka kahani mein hona justify kiya gaya hai, kahin bhi koyi bhi character bina matlab nahi ghus aaya...

Ab dekhna ye hai ke Mehta waali meeting mein kaun kaun shaamil tha aur unka maksad kya tha? Aur Shruti is sab ki sachayi jaan bhi paayegi ya nahi? Aruhi sach mein kisi beemari ka shikaar hai ya kewal naatak kar rahi hai? At last, Ek baar ko apun ko ye bhi laga ke asal mein ye sab jo ho raha hai wo kewal Shruti ki kalpana hai...

Outstanding Story & Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...

Harshit bhai... Kayi horror stories padhi hain maine, joki poori tarah se horror genre par based hain but jis tarah ka scene aap create karte ho, taking into note ye story horror genre par based hai bhi nahi, that's phenomenal...

meghnath naam rakhne ke pichhe ki kahani bhi majedar hai ..
jab me TV nahi dekhta( waise tha nahi nahi ghar par ) tha bachpan me aur bas naam suna karta tha to khudko SHAKTI KAPOOR. kehta tha dosto ke bich ..ye kissa padhke bachpan ki yaade taaza ho gayi ..

Slowly my interest is increasing towards the story full of adventure, fun to read, no doubt you are a great writer, thank you for writing such a beautiful story.

Have to admit, your story completely twists the thinking, sometimes it seems in the mind that it is just a disease and sometimes it seems like something supernatural. Your writing is commendable, even after writing this much there are many questions and there will be many such points which I have missed. In some scenes there was a combination of intensity as well as erotic scenes, which you have shown very well, what should I say now, now the words of praise are over understand my feelings.
harshit1890 Hats Off... enjoyed it.

but why were you making her nude everytime in front of everyone.

मुझे नहीं लगता दुनिया में कोई भी ऐसा माई का माल होगा जिसे इस कहानी की पहेली समझ में आ रही हो। गजब का दिमाग हिला रखा है आपने हर्षित भाई।

The whole incident, that Mansion one was written so beautifully that no words are sufficient to describe it! Ismein koyi doraye nahin ki maine aaj tak kisi ko bhi is tarah ka horror likhte nahi dekha hai... Haunted ko read kiya tha maine, kaafi pehle, aur main bilkul daave se keh sakta hoon, that you're the best,when it comes to generating real fear in readers, while they read the story..

Bhatt the phakk is this estory?

 

[Naina]

Take 4 chammch beer shot neet... Aaram se chadar taan kar sone ka... Aur sapne me itminan se soch'kar kal aakar band bajane ka..

Waise iss thread par bhi shadi ka band hi bajana hai na

Ghani dukh ki baat hai....lagta hai us kulta imli ne kuch zyada hi Kala jadu kar diya hai hamare nainu saheb ke upor
इसलिए इसलिए
ये भटकाव अच्छा नहीं इश्क बुरी बला होती है लग जाये तो आसानी से पीछा नहीं छूटता। हम आपको मना तो नहीं कर सकते पर इतना जरुर है की प्रीत का स्वाद जो चखा जुबान ने फिर बेगाने हुए जग से समझो.....
Btw I blame hawasi tharki apsyu

 

[Naina]

Ghani dukh ki baat hai....lagta hai us kulta imli ne kuch zyada hi Kala jadu kar diya hai hamare nainu saheb ke upor
इसलिए इसलिए
ये भटकाव अच्छा नहीं इश्क बुरी बला होती है लग जाये तो आसानी से पीछा नहीं छूटता। हम आपको मना तो नहीं कर सकते पर इतना जरुर है की प्रीत का स्वाद जो चखा जुबान ने फिर बेगाने हुए जग से समझो.....
Btw I blame hawasi tharki apsyu

harshit1890 sahab ji isliye nischal ko is girls hostel story pe as a hero add kijiye

 

[Naina]

You are welcome dear... U can read "Hunted & haweli" series also by Harshit bhai... Epic horror drama

 

[nain11ster]

Ghani dukh ki baat hai....lagta hai us kulta imli ne kuch zyada hi Kala jadu kar diya hai hamare nainu saheb ke upor
इसलिए इसलिए
ये भटकाव अच्छा नहीं इश्क बुरी बला होती है लग जाये तो आसानी से पीछा नहीं छूटता। हम आपको मना तो नहीं कर सकते पर इतना जरुर है की प्रीत का स्वाद जो चखा जुबान ने फिर बेगाने हुए जग से समझो.....
Btw I blame hawasi tharki apsyu

Gajab naina gajab ka swag ... Hats off..

Main 2+2 puchh lun to javab aa raha.. "I am hateli naina"... Wowwww..

Na pura gaanv jaan'na chahta hai... Kaise kar leti hain aap ye kaarnama

 

[nain11ster]

Aise hint hint kaiko maang rahi wo mere dur ki dost thi jo aksar apni kahani shuru karne se pahle dusron ke thread par promo ke liye chali aati hai..

Ek ghanta baad edited ...

Mere fekne ki poll khul gayi

 

[Bhavana694]

Aise hint hint kaiko maang rahi wo mere dur ki dost thi jo aksar apni kahani shuru karne se pahle dusron ke thread par promo ke liye chali aati hai..

First of all i dont even know u forget friendship nd second thing is i nvr mentioned my story or anything in any of the thread..i just read the story on suggestion of few people in forum

 

[nain11ster]

First of all i dont even know u forget friendship nd second thing is i nvr mentioned my story or anything in any of the thread..i just read the story on suggestion of few people in forum

Oooooooo ..

It was just a fun around with miss naina ... Yahan hum sab ne aapke post dekhe... Kahin dur dur se story parmotion nahi tha, aur na hi iss waqt aapke koi story thread running hai, isliye ye dala tha taki wo ja'kar search kare... ... I just informed her indirectly.. one of the writer around us...

Aap ko itni subah gusse hone ki koi jaroorat na hai... Main doston ke bich thode bahut mazak mazak kar leta hun... Like Chinturocky post ..

So chill and sorry for your inconvenience... Smile please

 

[Naina]

Haan to harshit saheb...
1) kya sachme astitv mein the saare kirdaar jinki jikar aapne abhi tak ki hai is story pe....
supriya, megha, tanu, komal, kaamini and all...
ya warden Shailaja, jaggu ya sonu etc. kya inlogo ka astitva tha? ya ye just illusion hai aaruhi ki?
2) agar astitva tha to kaha hai wo log abhi? Kya kar rahe hai wo log abhi?
3) baat 8 saal pehle pe atki hai....
ravina ki maut huyi thi 8 saal pehle...
abhi aaruhi & friends group bata rahe hai 8 saal se wo girls hostel bandh hai?yahan pe theory dagmaga jaaye kahani ko leke.... iska kya nishkarsh nikale hum? Matlab present ke hissab se dekhe to is hisab se hostel wali ravina ki maut 16 saal pehle huyi thi...
4)kya koi connection hai 8 saal pehle ghati ghatana se aaruhi ki.... kya connection hai? aur kyun aur kis liye connection hai?
5) sab kuch jaante huye bhi kyun nahi Roka aaruhi ko waha hostel mein jaane se uske friends? kya uske friends hi asli dusman hai?
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college ne un bachon ko mana kiya hai miss jo yahan aye hain.... unhe to mana nahi kiya na jo yahan ab nahi hai.. " shruti ne nandini ko bich mein rokte hue kaha.
" matlab? "
" vo aaruhi nahi thi miss.

matlab saaf hai shruti supriya ya megha ko bhali bhaanti jaanti hai.... Lekin kaise?
Aur sawal hai....
jab wo tharki aaruhi & chillar gang bhag jaane ke baad hostel ka Pramukh Darwaza kisne bandh kiya tha?
Koun hai wo?
torch ko magnet se koun idhar udhar ludka rahi thi? koun hai woh?
ya phir Darwaza bandh karne wala ya wali aur torch ke sath ched khani karne wali ya wala ek hi person hai?
aur bhi sawal hai..
lekin pehle in sawalon ko clear kijiye...

 

[Naina]

Aise hint hint kaiko maang rahi wo mere dur ki dost thi jo aksar apni kahani shuru karne se pahle dusron ke thread par promo ke liye chali aati hai..

Ek ghanta baad edited ...

Mere fekne ki poll khul gayi

Btw I blame tharki prachi

 

[SHADOW KING]

gajab ka update ..to kya jo supriya ki kahani chal rahi thi wo past tha us hostel ka .

aur ye aaruhi kuch dino se roj us band pade hostel me jaake soti hai .
ye gaggan to ekdam ghatiya aur darpok kism ka hai .
pehli torch bhi girayi aur baadme dusri bhi ,itna jyada darpok ke haath me torch denewala vishal bhi bewakoof hi hai ..