Fantasy " Girls Hostel " { Completed }

[harshit1890]

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Chapter 1 ~~ " Supriya "​

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Chapter ~~ 5 " The Antiquarian "​

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Chapter ~~ 6 " The Amazon "​

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Some Comments for this story (Late Add-on )

सच में , यह पुरी स्टोरी दिमाग के परखच्चे उड़ाए जा रही है । कभी लगता है कहानी में सस्पेंस है तो कभी लगता है भ्रम जाल का ताना-बाना बुना हुआ है तो कभी लगता है जैसे कोई रूहानी ताकतें हैं तो कभी लगता है यह सिंपल स्टोरी है जिसमें आरूहि एक गम्भीर बिमारी से पीड़ित है ।

मुझे लगता है इससे बेहतरीन कहानी फिलहाल तो इस फोरम पर नहीं है । और सबसे बड़ी खासियत है आपके लिखने का स्टाइल और अंदाज । आउटस्टैंडिंग हर्षित भाई ।

thoos thoos ke khana khaya aaruhi ne jo ekdam majedar horror type scene tha ..

सही में , हर्षित भाई ! मुझे बहुत ही दया आने लगा है आरूहि पर । अगर किसी हरामखोर की वजह से उसकी हालत ऐसी हुई है तो उसे जहन्नुम का रास्ता जरूर दिखला दिजियेगा ।

WTF!!! Yahi pehla reaction nikalta hai is kahani ko poora padhne ke baad... Halanki pehle bhi maine is kahani ke kuchh 7-8 updates padhe huye the par jab is baar padhna shuru kiya to ek naya sa romanch har beet te update ke saath banta gaya... Bohot hi zyada behatreen tareeke se likhi gayi kahani hai ye, ab jis prakaar ka plot imagine kiya hai lekhak saahab ne uske baad ek nausikhiya bhi likhe to bhi kahani halki nahi ho sakti, aur yahaan jis level ka narration, aur scene specialization hame padhne ko mila hai, wo kaafi hai dikhane ke liye that this is, without a doubt,one of the finest stories available on XF... Chahe wo running stories hon ya fir completed, aur chahe future mein likhi jaane waali kahaniyan, is story ka ek alag hi sthaan bana rehne waala hai forum par... Aur iske liye writer saahab ki jitni bhi tareef ki jaaye wo kam hi hogi...

Fantasy genre ke saath shuru huyi ye kahani, kab alag - alag genres ke darshan karane lagi padhte waqt katayi pata nahi chala... Horror, Suspense, Thriller, Adventure, Romance and of course Fantasy, aur saath hi mein Erotica ke ansh bhi... Ek story mein is se zyada kis cheez ki apeksha kar sakta hai reader!? Again, one of the best stories I've ever read... Outstanding Stuff harshit1890 bhai...

Kya hi khubsurat kahani likhi hai aapne bhai... I'm just speechless, jitni bhi tareef karunga kam hi hogi... Erotica ka bhi bilkul sahi situation mein use Kiya gaya hai aur sabse important har kirdaar par lekhak ki shaandar pakad bani rahi hai... Har character ka kahani mein hona justify kiya gaya hai, kahin bhi koyi bhi character bina matlab nahi ghus aaya...

Ab dekhna ye hai ke Mehta waali meeting mein kaun kaun shaamil tha aur unka maksad kya tha? Aur Shruti is sab ki sachayi jaan bhi paayegi ya nahi? Aruhi sach mein kisi beemari ka shikaar hai ya kewal naatak kar rahi hai? At last, Ek baar ko apun ko ye bhi laga ke asal mein ye sab jo ho raha hai wo kewal Shruti ki kalpana hai...

Outstanding Story & Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...

Harshit bhai... Kayi horror stories padhi hain maine, joki poori tarah se horror genre par based hain but jis tarah ka scene aap create karte ho, taking into note ye story horror genre par based hai bhi nahi, that's phenomenal...

meghnath naam rakhne ke pichhe ki kahani bhi majedar hai ..
jab me TV nahi dekhta( waise tha nahi nahi ghar par ) tha bachpan me aur bas naam suna karta tha to khudko SHAKTI KAPOOR. kehta tha dosto ke bich ..ye kissa padhke bachpan ki yaade taaza ho gayi ..

Slowly my interest is increasing towards the story full of adventure, fun to read, no doubt you are a great writer, thank you for writing such a beautiful story.

Have to admit, your story completely twists the thinking, sometimes it seems in the mind that it is just a disease and sometimes it seems like something supernatural. Your writing is commendable, even after writing this much there are many questions and there will be many such points which I have missed. In some scenes there was a combination of intensity as well as erotic scenes, which you have shown very well, what should I say now, now the words of praise are over understand my feelings.
harshit1890 Hats Off... enjoyed it.

but why were you making her nude everytime in front of everyone.

मुझे नहीं लगता दुनिया में कोई भी ऐसा माई का माल होगा जिसे इस कहानी की पहेली समझ में आ रही हो। गजब का दिमाग हिला रखा है आपने हर्षित भाई।

The whole incident, that Mansion one was written so beautifully that no words are sufficient to describe it! Ismein koyi doraye nahin ki maine aaj tak kisi ko bhi is tarah ka horror likhte nahi dekha hai... Haunted ko read kiya tha maine, kaafi pehle, aur main bilkul daave se keh sakta hoon, that you're the best,when it comes to generating real fear in readers, while they read the story..

Bhatt the phakk is this estory?

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

SANJU ( V. R. ) KEKIUS MAXIMUS Death Kiñg GuptAbhishek Aakash. Naina And all other readers

SANJU ( V. R. ) KEKIUS MAXIMUS Death Kiñg GuptAbhishek Aakash. And all other readers

Good to have written something today after long.. Maybe aur likh paaun..

आप को पता है रात को मै अपने आंखो पर और दिमाग पर जोर नही देता। लेकिन बहुत ही बढ़िया लगा आपको वापस देखकर। कल सुबह पढ़ता हूं भाई।

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

एक और रोंगटे खड़ा कर देने वाला अपडेट ।
ये चारों शर्तिया मौत से खेल रहे हैं। पानी का बहाव ऊपर से नीचे की तरफ आता है जिसमे कुछ पानी जमीन के अंदर समा जाता है और बाकी पानी मिल कर एक दरिया का निर्माण कर देता है। यह कहने की जरूरत नही कि समन्दर अधिकांशतः जल का अंतिम पड़ाव होता है।
जहां ये लोग मौजूद है वहां मूसलाधार बरसात का पानी बहते हुए नीचे की तरफ जाकर एक जगह पर ही इकठ्ठा हो जाना है मतलब वो ऐसे जगह पहुंच जाएंगे जहां सिर्फ पानी ही पानी है। मुझे नही लगता ये लोग वहां सर्वाइव कर पाएंगे !
अगर ये उस पत्थर की दीवार से रास्ता बनाकर आगे बढ़ेंगे तब इन्हे एक बहुत बड़े जल समूह का सामना करना होगा और वो अत्यंत ही भयावह होगा।

मै अबतक समझ नही पा रहा हूं कि हिन्दुस्तान के एक शहर के गर्ल्स होस्टल मे हो रही वारदात से अमेजन के जंगलों का क्या सम्बन्ध ? और वह भी इस जंगल के एक खास हिस्से से !

आरोही इस वक्त बीमार प्रतीत हो रही है। उसके मुंह से खून निकल रहा है और ये कोई अच्छा लक्षण नही है। इस एडवेंचर्स जर्नी के दौरान उसका प्रजेंस आफ माइंड इन सभी मे सबसे अच्छा रहा है , ये उसने इजिप्टियन मैजिकल बाक्स का इस्तेमाल कर फिर से साबित कर दिया है।
लेकिन मुझे फिक्र है इस लड़की की । वो इस वक्त बीमारी की हालत मे है। आगे आने वाला खतरा अलग से है ही।

देखते है , इस पत्थर के दीवार के पार क्या है !
बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट हर्षित भाई।
आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड अमेजिंग अपडेट।

 

[KEKIUS MAXIMUS]

romanchak update ..jungle ka mahaul kahani ko ekdam dhansu bana raha hai aur jis tarah jungle ka har pal darshaya gaya hai wo kaabile taarif hai .. har scene jaise aakho ke saamne ho raha hai .

meghnath kuch jyada hi hyper ho raha hai ,usko ye pata nahi ki uske saatg normal students hai na ki koi jungle ke adventure karnewale .
barish aur kichad me saaman leke chalne se har koi thak hi jayega .

shruti ka hajirjawab hona hamesha majedar hi lagta hai bhale kitni hi pareshani me kyu na ho wo .mooth maarne ko lekar sahi jawab diya meghnath ko .
par aaj shruti ka dimag kaam nahi kar raha tha sabkuch meghnath aur aarohi ne hi khoja ,
darwaja kholne ke liye bahut mehnat karni padi vishal aur meghnath ko .aur yaha bhi aarohi ka dimag hi kaam aaya bhale darwaja pura nahi khol paaye .
ab aage aur kya adventure aayega in 4 ki life me dekhte hai .

 

[Aakash.]

Thanks bhai log waiting krne ke liye, but kch bi good news nai hai. Life things, kch problems ke sath hi chalti hai. Abhi tym mila tha to socha tha is week kahani kafi likh kr aage aapko pdwaunga but saddened meri lower back mei injury ho gayi. Aur baith kr likh pana seems to impossible. Complete bed rest pr hu.. sad for me and i knw for all, bht jda delay hai. But i didn't loose hope i will finish this story, kab keh nai skta but karunga jarur.

Waise bhalog aap sab kaise ho? Bht miss krta hu is place ko aur aap sabko? Nainaji to still angry kr something else with me but good to see her back mtlb unban ho gaye

Jald lautunga...

Hamesha dukh dard or pida hi bataoge kya Hume jaise pata hi nahi hai bhai Sahab shadi ke laddu kha rahe hai wo bhi maze ke saath

Anyway der aaye durust aaye aisa hi kuch kehte hai wo apan ki taraf se or or or update do apan ko aarohi se duri bardaash na hori ab ​

 

[Aakash.]

Story turns suspense to adventure, If we read the beginning of this journey and the part of the jungle together then the enjoyment of the story doubles. It means to say that I am openly abusing the Writer

Well, Meghnath's changed form or say behavior is clearly telling that what we have set out in search of is wonderful, it has answers to all our questions and I myself am curious to know what it is

Don't know why once I remembered Lara Croft Tomb Raider as a child, finally after so much hard work the door for which we came here risking our lives opened. Post next update soon, can't wait

I don't have much to say, I will just say that I am worried about Aarohi. ​

 

[KEKIUS MAXIMUS]

Story turns suspense to adventure, If we read the beginning of this journey and the part of the jungle together then the enjoyment of the story doubles. It means to say that I am openly abusing the Writer

Well, Meghnath's changed form or say behavior is clearly telling that what we have set out in search of is wonderful, it has answers to all our questions and I myself am curious to know what it is

Don't know why once I remembered Lara Croft Tomb Raider as a child, finally after so much hard work the door for which we came here risking our lives opened. Post next update soon, can't wait

I don't have much to say, I will just say that I am worried about Aarohi. ​

aapka review best hota hai bas hindi me likhte to jyada achcha lagta ..
lara tomb rider jaisi kahani hai ye kehna sahi hai ..jungle adventure ...

 

[Aakash.]

aapka review best hota hai bas hindi me likhte to jyada achcha lagta ..
lara tomb rider jaisi kahani hai ye kehna sahi hai ..jungle adventure ...

Bru me Bru Lee Bru

Tumhe samjh Me aa gaya na itna kaafi nahi hai ​

 

[GuptAbhishek]

Waiting for next update n thank u Bhai aap wapas aaye or update diya maja aa gya mene to xforum me aana hi bnd kr diya tha

 

[GuptAbhishek]

Kya Harshit bhai fir gayab ho gaye I know aap busy honge aapki b personal life hai but hmara b socho thoda wese hi story apne last phase pr hai kuch updates me end ho jayegi to plzzz isko end kr do jaldi se fir aap apni life enjoy kr sakte ho koi preshan nahi krega aapko

 

[GuptAbhishek]

Bahut din se waiting for next update