Fantasy " Girls Hostel " { Completed }

[harshit1890]

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Chapter 1 ~~ " Supriya "​

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Chapter ~~ 6 " The Amazon "​

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Finale Chapter 7 : " Book Of Hoax "​

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Spoiler: Special Comments On Story

Some Comments for this story (Late Add-on )

सच में , यह पुरी स्टोरी दिमाग के परखच्चे उड़ाए जा रही है । कभी लगता है कहानी में सस्पेंस है तो कभी लगता है भ्रम जाल का ताना-बाना बुना हुआ है तो कभी लगता है जैसे कोई रूहानी ताकतें हैं तो कभी लगता है यह सिंपल स्टोरी है जिसमें आरूहि एक गम्भीर बिमारी से पीड़ित है ।

मुझे लगता है इससे बेहतरीन कहानी फिलहाल तो इस फोरम पर नहीं है । और सबसे बड़ी खासियत है आपके लिखने का स्टाइल और अंदाज । आउटस्टैंडिंग हर्षित भाई ।

thoos thoos ke khana khaya aaruhi ne jo ekdam majedar horror type scene tha ..

सही में , हर्षित भाई ! मुझे बहुत ही दया आने लगा है आरूहि पर । अगर किसी हरामखोर की वजह से उसकी हालत ऐसी हुई है तो उसे जहन्नुम का रास्ता जरूर दिखला दिजियेगा ।

WTF!!! Yahi pehla reaction nikalta hai is kahani ko poora padhne ke baad... Halanki pehle bhi maine is kahani ke kuchh 7-8 updates padhe huye the par jab is baar padhna shuru kiya to ek naya sa romanch har beet te update ke saath banta gaya... Bohot hi zyada behatreen tareeke se likhi gayi kahani hai ye, ab jis prakaar ka plot imagine kiya hai lekhak saahab ne uske baad ek nausikhiya bhi likhe to bhi kahani halki nahi ho sakti, aur yahaan jis level ka narration, aur scene specialization hame padhne ko mila hai, wo kaafi hai dikhane ke liye that this is, without a doubt,one of the finest stories available on XF... Chahe wo running stories hon ya fir completed, aur chahe future mein likhi jaane waali kahaniyan, is story ka ek alag hi sthaan bana rehne waala hai forum par... Aur iske liye writer saahab ki jitni bhi tareef ki jaaye wo kam hi hogi...

Fantasy genre ke saath shuru huyi ye kahani, kab alag - alag genres ke darshan karane lagi padhte waqt katayi pata nahi chala... Horror, Suspense, Thriller, Adventure, Romance and of course Fantasy, aur saath hi mein Erotica ke ansh bhi... Ek story mein is se zyada kis cheez ki apeksha kar sakta hai reader!? Again, one of the best stories I've ever read... Outstanding Stuff harshit1890 bhai...

Kya hi khubsurat kahani likhi hai aapne bhai... I'm just speechless, jitni bhi tareef karunga kam hi hogi... Erotica ka bhi bilkul sahi situation mein use Kiya gaya hai aur sabse important har kirdaar par lekhak ki shaandar pakad bani rahi hai... Har character ka kahani mein hona justify kiya gaya hai, kahin bhi koyi bhi character bina matlab nahi ghus aaya...

Ab dekhna ye hai ke Mehta waali meeting mein kaun kaun shaamil tha aur unka maksad kya tha? Aur Shruti is sab ki sachayi jaan bhi paayegi ya nahi? Aruhi sach mein kisi beemari ka shikaar hai ya kewal naatak kar rahi hai? At last, Ek baar ko apun ko ye bhi laga ke asal mein ye sab jo ho raha hai wo kewal Shruti ki kalpana hai...

Outstanding Story & Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...

Harshit bhai... Kayi horror stories padhi hain maine, joki poori tarah se horror genre par based hain but jis tarah ka scene aap create karte ho, taking into note ye story horror genre par based hai bhi nahi, that's phenomenal...

meghnath naam rakhne ke pichhe ki kahani bhi majedar hai ..
jab me TV nahi dekhta( waise tha nahi nahi ghar par ) tha bachpan me aur bas naam suna karta tha to khudko SHAKTI KAPOOR. kehta tha dosto ke bich ..ye kissa padhke bachpan ki yaade taaza ho gayi ..

Slowly my interest is increasing towards the story full of adventure, fun to read, no doubt you are a great writer, thank you for writing such a beautiful story.

Have to admit, your story completely twists the thinking, sometimes it seems in the mind that it is just a disease and sometimes it seems like something supernatural. Your writing is commendable, even after writing this much there are many questions and there will be many such points which I have missed. In some scenes there was a combination of intensity as well as erotic scenes, which you have shown very well, what should I say now, now the words of praise are over understand my feelings.
harshit1890 Hats Off... enjoyed it.

but why were you making her nude everytime in front of everyone.

मुझे नहीं लगता दुनिया में कोई भी ऐसा माई का माल होगा जिसे इस कहानी की पहेली समझ में आ रही हो। गजब का दिमाग हिला रखा है आपने हर्षित भाई।

The whole incident, that Mansion one was written so beautifully that no words are sufficient to describe it! Ismein koyi doraye nahin ki maine aaj tak kisi ko bhi is tarah ka horror likhte nahi dekha hai... Haunted ko read kiya tha maine, kaafi pehle, aur main bilkul daave se keh sakta hoon, that you're the best,when it comes to generating real fear in readers, while they read the story..

Bhatt the phakk is this estory?

 

[GuptAbhishek]

Parso ayega

Ye sala parso aaya nahin reh kaha gya ye dhundho yr usko koi

 

[Aakash.]

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[GuptAbhishek]

Lagta hai iss story ka end kbi padhne ko nahi milega hame

 

[Itachi_Uchiha]

Hello everyone.

We are Happy to present to you The annual story contest of XForum

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Well iske baare mein thoda aapko bata dun ye ek short story contest hai jisme aap kisi bhi prefix ki short story post kar sakte ho, jo minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words ke bich honi chahiye (Story ke words count karne ke liye is tool ka use kare — Characters Tool) . Isliye main aapko invitation deta hun ki aap is contest mein apne khayaalon ko shabdon kaa roop dekar isme apni stories daalein jisko poora XForum dekhega, Ye ek bahot accha kadam hoga aapke or aapki stories ke liye kyunki USC ki stories ko poore XForum ke readers read karte hain.. Aap XForum ke sarvashreshth lekhakon mein se ek hain. aur aapki kahani bhi bahut acchi chal rahi hai. Isliye hum aapse USC ke liye ek chhoti kahani likhne ka anurodh karte hain. hum jaante hain ki aapke paas samay ki kami hai lekin iske bawajood hum ye bhi jaante hain ki aapke liye kuch bhi asambhav nahi hai.

Aur jo readers likhna nahi chahte woh bhi is contest mein participate kar sakte hain "Best Readers Award" ke liye. Aapko bas karna ye hoga ki contest mein posted stories ko read karke unke upar apne views dene honge.

Winning Writer's ko well deserved Cash Awards milenge, uske alawa aapko apna thread apne section mein sticky karne ka mouka bhi milega taaki aapka thread top par rahe uss dauraan. Isliye aapsab ke liye ye ek behtareen mouka hai XForum ke sabhi readers ke upar apni chhaap chhodne ka or apni reach badhaane kaa.. Ye aap sabhi ke liye ek bahut hi sunehra avsar hai apni kalpanao ko shabdon ka raasta dikha ke yahan pesh karne ka. Isliye aage badhe aur apni kalpanao ko shabdon mein likhkar duniya ko dikha de.

Entry thread 15th February ko open ho chuka matlab aap apni story daalna shuru kar sakte hain or woh thread 5th March 2024 tak open rahega is dauraan aap apni story post kar sakte hain. Isliye aap abhi se apni Kahaani likhna shuru kardein toh aapke liye better rahega.

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[harshit1890]

Hows everyone

I know long gone and busy somewhere yeah i understand its been too long.. Ahh

Kaise ho bhai log aap sab? Baht din baad aya idhar.. Kya karein yaar life bht jada busy ho gayi hai. Khud ke liye time hi nahi bacha hai ab. Aisa nahi hai maine kosish nahi ki aur na likhne ki jabki maine kafi had tak kahani likh kr end tak le aya tha lekin fir jab khud pada to pasnd hi nahi aya aur sab hata dia aur dubara likhne ka mauka nahi laga. Pata nahi shayad ye kahani end tak atte hue adhui hi reh jayegi...

Aap log kaise ho? hope sab apni apni life mein kush hoge...

SANJU ( V. R. ) GuptAbhishek

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

Hows everyone

I know long gone and busy somewhere yeah i understand its been too long.. Ahh

Kaise ho bhai log aap sab? Baht din baad aya idhar.. Kya karein yaar life bht jada busy ho gayi hai. Khud ke liye time hi nahi bacha hai ab. Aisa nahi hai maine kosish nahi ki aur na likhne ki jabki maine kafi had tak kahani likh kr end tak le aya tha lekin fir jab khud pada to pasnd hi nahi aya aur sab hata dia aur dubara likhne ka mauka nahi laga. Pata nahi shayad ye kahani end tak atte hue adhui hi reh jayegi...

Aap log kaise ho? hope sab apni apni life mein kush hoge...

SANJU ( V. R. ) GuptAbhishek

आप की स्थिति और vj4u साहब की स्थिति से बहुत पहले मै गुजर चुका हूं । आप दोनो की नई नई शादी हुई है और नई शादी के बाद मर्दों की स्थिति कैसी होती है वो मै अच्छी तरह समझ सकता हूं ।
दरअसल शादी जूता खरीदने की तरह होती है । जूता कितना ही किमती और शानदार क्यों न हो , उसकी सूरत देखकर यह कहा नही जा सकता कि वह काटेगा या नही , और अगर काटेगा तो कब काटेगा , कहां काटेगा , किस तरह काटेगा !
जब तक काटे नही तब तक मजे से जीवन काटते रहिए ।

एक हमारे Yug Purush साहब है और एक nain11ster साहब है जो शादी के बाद की उस समय , उस लम्हात को जी रहे हैं जिसे एक्स्ट्रा मैरिटल अफेयर्स कहा जाता है । पत्नी से बेजार माशूका की आगोश कहां कुछ सोचने देती !
स्टोरी वगैरह वगैरह जैसी चीजों पर क्यों मगज खपाए !

 

[GuptAbhishek]

Hows everyone

I know long gone and busy somewhere yeah i understand its been too long.. Ahh

Kaise ho bhai log aap sab? Baht din baad aya idhar.. Kya karein yaar life bht jada busy ho gayi hai. Khud ke liye time hi nahi bacha hai ab. Aisa nahi hai maine kosish nahi ki aur na likhne ki jabki maine kafi had tak kahani likh kr end tak le aya tha lekin fir jab khud pada to pasnd hi nahi aya aur sab hata dia aur dubara likhne ka mauka nahi laga. Pata nahi shayad ye kahani end tak atte hue adhui hi reh jayegi...

Aap log kaise ho? hope sab apni apni life mein kush hoge...

SANJU ( V. R. ) GuptAbhishek

Hum thik hai bhai but me chahta hu aap thik raho taki aap ye story complete kro or ye na kaho ki shayad ye story adhuri hi reh jayegi mene bahut wait Kiya h

Sach batau to ye story bhi mere liye utni khas nahi thi jitni ki or b stories hai iss forum pr but jbse isme haunted k shreyas ki entry Hui tbse ye story mere dil k kafi karib hai or me dil se chahta hu ki aap is story ko complete kro chahe time jitna b lelo plzz

Personal life me to khus hu me but ye story Puri nahi hui to dukhi ho jaunga for sure

Wating for next update

 

[harshit1890]

आप की स्थिति और vj4u साहब की स्थिति से बहुत पहले मै गुजर चुका हूं । आप दोनो की नई नई शादी हुई है और नई शादी के बाद मर्दों की स्थिति कैसी होती है वो मै अच्छी तरह समझ सकता हूं ।
दरअसल शादी जूता खरीदने की तरह होती है । जूता कितना ही किमती और शानदार क्यों न हो , उसकी सूरत देखकर यह कहा नही जा सकता कि वह काटेगा या नही , और अगर काटेगा तो कब काटेगा , कहां काटेगा , किस तरह काटेगा !
जब तक काटे नही तब तक मजे से जीवन काटते रहिए ।

एक हमारे Yug Purush साहब है और एक nain11ster साहब है जो शादी के बाद की उस समय , उस लम्हात को जी रहे हैं जिसे एक्स्ट्रा मैरिटल अफेयर्स कहा जाता है । पत्नी से बेजार माशूका की आगोश कहां कुछ सोचने देती !
स्टोरी वगैरह वगैरह जैसी चीजों पर क्यों मगज खपाए !

Hahaha... Are Sir shadi ke baad kahan se akele ka samay milta. Biwi ke samne likh diye to biwi zinda na chhodegi karam kaaand bahut kiye hai na idhar
Acha laga dekh kar aap abhi bhi yahin ho aur swasth ho..
Magaz to khub khapata hu, ending abhi tak sathik dimag mein baitha na paya hun to sochta to rehta hi hun.. pata nahi kabhi likh pau. Is chakar mein ek aur idea dimag mein rkhela hun ek alag story ka.. par vo bhi nahi utaar sakta... I hope kabhi ye to khatam ho hi jaye

Hum thik hai bhai but me chahta hu aap thik raho taki aap ye story complete kro or ye na kaho ki shayad ye story adhuri hi reh jayegi mene bahut wait Kiya h

Sach batau to ye story bhi mere liye utni khas nahi thi jitni ki or b stories hai iss forum pr but jbse isme haunted k shreyas ki entry Hui tbse ye story mere dil k kafi karib hai or me dil se chahta hu ki aap is story ko complete kro chahe time jitna b lelo plzz

Personal life me to khus hu me but ye story Puri nahi hui to dukhi ho jaunga for sure

Wating for next update

Bhai kosish to yahi hai ki khatam ho jaye kabhi na kabhi
Bhai agar end likh dia maine to shayad ye XP mein ane walle salon mein agar kisi ne padi to uske rongte khade kr degi ye gurantee mai deta hu Haunted ka connection utna hi tha Kyun ki H4 kabhi ayegi nahi.. Ab agar likha to vo strech ho jayegi jo mai karna nahi chahta, Dimag mein ek storyline hai lekin utni kuch khas nahi hogi to khma kha chizeon ko strech nahi karna lekin jitna part dala vo behad jaruri tha aur filal kuch na kuch abhi aage aur mil jayega.

Sun kar acha laga ki aap kush ho..

Aakash.

KEKIUS MAXIMUS

Kaise ho bhai logis?

 

[Aakash.]

Aakash.

Hariya kaku Bhabhi ke pallu se bahar aane ka waqt mil gaya

Khair chodo sabhi baate aapko online dekhkar accha laga hope ju shadi ke Laddu acche se kha rahe honge ​

 

[Aakash.]

Bhai kosish to yahi hai ki khatam ho jaye kabhi na kabhi
Bhai agar end likh dia maine to shayad ye XP mein ane walle salon mein agar kisi ne padi to uske rongte khade kr degi ye gurantee mai deta hu Haunted ka connection utna hi tha Kyun ki H4 kabhi ayegi nahi.. Ab agar likha to vo strech ho jayegi jo mai karna nahi chahta, Dimag mein ek storyline hai lekin utni kuch khas nahi hogi to khma kha chizeon ko strech nahi karna lekin jitna part dala vo behad jaruri tha aur filal kuch na kuch abhi aage aur mil jayega.

Bilkul aapka kehna sahi hai or jab hum sehmati de rahe hai koi do raay nahi hai is kahani jaisi koi kahani na hai na hongi ​