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Fantasy " Girls Hostel " { Completed }

harshit1890

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~~INDEX~~

Chapter 1 ~~ " Supriya "
Chapter ~~ 2 " The Illusion "
Chapter ~~ 3 " Catatonic Schizophrenia "
Chapter ~~ 4 " A True Face "
Chapter ~~ 5 " The Antiquarian "
Chapter ~~ 6 " The Amazon "
Finale
Chapter 7 : " Book Of Hoax "

Some Comments for this story :love: (Late Add-on :sigh:)

सच में , यह पुरी स्टोरी दिमाग के परखच्चे उड़ाए जा रही है । कभी लगता है कहानी में सस्पेंस है तो कभी लगता है भ्रम जाल का ताना-बाना बुना हुआ है तो कभी लगता है जैसे कोई रूहानी ताकतें हैं तो कभी लगता है यह सिंपल स्टोरी है जिसमें आरूहि एक गम्भीर बिमारी से पीड़ित है ।

मुझे लगता है इससे बेहतरीन कहानी फिलहाल तो इस फोरम पर नहीं है । और सबसे बड़ी खासियत है आपके लिखने का स्टाइल और अंदाज । आउटस्टैंडिंग हर्षित भाई ।
thoos thoos ke khana khaya aaruhi ne jo ekdam majedar horror type scene tha ..
सही में , हर्षित भाई ! मुझे बहुत ही दया आने लगा है आरूहि पर । अगर किसी हरामखोर की वजह से उसकी हालत ऐसी हुई है तो उसे जहन्नुम का रास्ता जरूर दिखला दिजियेगा ।
WTF!!! Yahi pehla reaction nikalta hai is kahani ko poora padhne ke baad... Halanki pehle bhi maine is kahani ke kuchh 7-8 updates padhe huye the par jab is baar padhna shuru kiya to ek naya sa romanch har beet te update ke saath banta gaya... Bohot hi zyada behatreen tareeke se likhi gayi kahani hai ye, ab jis prakaar ka plot imagine kiya hai lekhak saahab ne uske baad ek nausikhiya bhi likhe to bhi kahani halki nahi ho sakti, aur yahaan jis level ka narration, aur scene specialization hame padhne ko mila hai, wo kaafi hai dikhane ke liye that this is, without a doubt,one of the finest stories available on XF... Chahe wo running stories hon ya fir completed, aur chahe future mein likhi jaane waali kahaniyan, is story ka ek alag hi sthaan bana rehne waala hai forum par... Aur iske liye writer saahab ki jitni bhi tareef ki jaaye wo kam hi hogi...

Fantasy genre ke saath shuru huyi ye kahani, kab alag - alag genres ke darshan karane lagi padhte waqt katayi pata nahi chala... Horror, Suspense, Thriller, Adventure, Romance and of course Fantasy, aur saath hi mein Erotica ke ansh bhi... Ek story mein is se zyada kis cheez ki apeksha kar sakta hai reader!? Again, one of the best stories I've ever read... Outstanding Stuff harshit1890 bhai... :bow: :bow: :bow:
Kya hi khubsurat kahani likhi hai aapne bhai... I'm just speechless, jitni bhi tareef karunga kam hi hogi... Erotica ka bhi bilkul sahi situation mein use Kiya gaya hai aur sabse important har kirdaar par lekhak ki shaandar pakad bani rahi hai... Har character ka kahani mein hona justify kiya gaya hai, kahin bhi koyi bhi character bina matlab nahi ghus aaya...

Ab dekhna ye hai ke Mehta waali meeting mein kaun kaun shaamil tha aur unka maksad kya tha? Aur Shruti is sab ki sachayi jaan bhi paayegi ya nahi? Aruhi sach mein kisi beemari ka shikaar hai ya kewal naatak kar rahi hai? At last, Ek baar ko apun ko ye bhi laga ke asal mein ye sab jo ho raha hai wo kewal Shruti ki kalpana hai... :dazed:

Outstanding Story & Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...
Harshit bhai... Kayi horror stories padhi hain maine, joki poori tarah se horror genre par based hain but jis tarah ka scene aap create karte ho, taking into note ye story horror genre par based hai bhi nahi, that's phenomenal...
meghnath naam rakhne ke pichhe ki kahani bhi majedar hai 😍😍😍..
jab me TV nahi dekhta( waise tha nahi nahi ghar par ) tha bachpan me aur bas naam suna karta tha to khudko SHAKTI KAPOOR. kehta tha dosto ke bich 🤣🤣🤣..ye kissa padhke bachpan ki yaade taaza ho gayi 😍😍😍..
Slowly my interest is increasing towards the story full of adventure, fun to read, no doubt you are a great writer, thank you for writing such a beautiful story.
Have to admit, your story completely twists the thinking, sometimes it seems in the mind that it is just a disease and sometimes it seems like something supernatural. Your writing is commendable, even after writing this much there are many questions and there will be many such points which I have missed. In some scenes there was a combination of intensity as well as erotic scenes, which you have shown very well, what should I say now, now the words of praise are over understand my feelings.
harshit1890 Hats Off... enjoyed it. :applause:
but why were you making her nude everytime in front of everyone. :angry:
मुझे नहीं लगता दुनिया में कोई भी ऐसा माई का माल होगा जिसे इस कहानी की पहेली समझ में आ रही हो। गजब का दिमाग हिला रखा है आपने हर्षित भाई।
The whole incident, that Mansion one was written so beautifully that no words are sufficient to describe it! Ismein koyi doraye nahin ki maine aaj tak kisi ko bhi is tarah ka horror likhte nahi dekha hai... Haunted ko read kiya tha maine, kaafi pehle, aur main bilkul daave se keh sakta hoon, that you're the best,when it comes to generating real fear in readers, while they read the story..
Bhatt the phakk is this estory?:redface:
 
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Update ~~ 8

" may i come in mam? " supriya ne chalti class ko disturb kiya to har koi usi ki taraf dekhne laga. Supriya dusri class ke liye bhi late thi isliye jis tarah use sunaina mam ghur rahi thi vo ache se samajh rahi thi.

" you are? " sunaina mam ne board se thoda hatte hue pucha.

" Supriya, mam "

" first time class attend kar rahi ho? " supriya jawab mein kya bolti ki han aaj se pehle kabhi class nahi li aur sirf usne hi kya Megha ne hi kaha tha ki is teacher ki class nahi lenge. Kyun ki ye use jada sexy thi aur iske padate tym har ladka apni laar lund ke roop mein tapkate hue hilata hai. Isliye use na sunaina mam pasand nahi thi aur na hi uski class lena pasand tha jiski wajah se sirf pehli class ke baad kabhi koi class nahi li gayi. Par jab supriya ne megha ko class mein baitha dekha to usko samajh hi nahi aya ki is baat ka vo gussa kare ya fir bura mane. " helo? are you there? tumhari wajah se class khali baithi hai, kuch bologi? " supriya ne sunana mam ko dekha. Vo roz isi tarah ati thi, sarre aur slevless blouse. Kahani to inki bhi thi ek jo megha ne hostel mein batai thi. Sunaina mam isi college ki student hua karti thi aaj se koi 4-5 saal pehle aur apne time mein bahut hi jada kheli khilai aurat thi lekin teacher banne ke baad andaz badal gaya tha. Umar shadi ki ho chuki thi lekin abhi tak kunwari thi. Inke bare mein isliye itni jankari thi kyun ki ye girls hostel ke bagal mein bane apartments mein se ek flat mein rehti thi. Pehle to akele rehti thi lekin ab koi aur bhi rehta hai kaun ye koi nahi janta. Par megha hamesha hi kehti thi ki jitna marzi acha dikh le ye sunaina par chehre se hi ras tapkati hai. Aur iska chakar jarur college ke professor Sameer ke sath chal raha hai jahan dono sirf apas mein hi nahi balki kuch student bhi maujud hai jo sunaina se padne jate hain. Private home tution.

" hey you? say something or get out " sunaina mam ke chillane par supriya apni soch se bahar ayi.

" sorry mam. Actually tabiyat thodi down hai isliye... " supriya ko down nahi bolna chahie tha, sabhi ladke uski taraf dekh hans pade. Vo janti thi ki sabko malum hai ki down ka matlab hota hai periods.

" mene apka naam pucha tha ye nahi ki aap kitne din se down hai " sunaina mam gusse mein boli to class ke kuch ladke hans diye. " shut up " vo chillai jiske baad sabhi ki hansi ruk gayi.

" no mam, nahi ki " supriya ne nazre jhukate hue kaha.

" good, to tum mere sath aaj HOD se milne chalna unhe jawab dena ki kyun nahi li class tumne ab tak. Ab baitho andar " sunaina mam ne supriya ko adesh diya aur supriya jakar ek khali padi seat par jaa baithi. Sunaina mam ne padana shuru hi kiya tha ki unka phone baj utha aur supriya ko mauka mil gaya. " ragini tum idhar baith jaogi " megha ke sath baithi ladki se usne pucha to usne bina mane kiye piche wale ladke ke sath ja baithi aur supriya megha ke pas.

" warden ne mujhe subah kisi kaam se bulaya tha aur main nahi gayi " supriya ki nazar samne thi kyun ki sunaina mam ne padhana shuru kar diya tha aur vo dusra mauka nahi dena chahti thi.

" warden ne tujhe kyun? " megha ke jawab mein kahin nahi tha ki vo gussa hai. " aur bulaya to bulaya tu gayi kyun nahi "

" dar ki wajah se "

" dar? kaisa dar "

" vo megha.. mene tujhse kal jhooth kaha tha " supriya ghabrate hue boli " kal mera phone vo us kamre mein reh gaya "

" kaunse kamre mein? "

" wahi... " supriya ek pal ke liye chup hui " tanu wale kamre mein "

" what the fucckk.... " megha ne supriya ki taraf hairani bhari nazron se dekha " tu wahan kya kar rahi thi " dabi awaz mein vo boli.

" vo main tujhe baad mein bataungi.. par agar vo phone unke hath lag gaya to ? " supriya ke chehre par dar saaf tha. Megha jawab deti use pehle sunaina mam ki annoncement ne dono ka dhayan us taraf modh diya.

" everyonne needs to prepare Chapter 1-5 for the upcoming Internal test which is going to be next week. So be prepared, warna punishment guptaji denge "

" par mam 5 chapters? abhi to hum first par hi hain aur " ek bache bol utha.

" Main tum logon ko first panch chapter padha rahi hun wahi badi baat hai varna ye sab tum apne school se padh kar aye ho. So don't be dumb and start recalling your previous studies "

" par mam "

" if you have any problem talk to HOD please " sunaina mam ne apna saman uthaya aur chalti bani. Un sabhi baton mein ye khas baat thi sunaina mam ki vo kabhi bhi course ko padha kar khatam nahi karti thi balki bina padaye hi khatam kar diya karti thi kai baar kosish ki class ne ki unke khilaf complain kar sake lekin na jane unhe ye baat kaise pata chal jati aur uske baad vo apne badan se class mein ladkon ki izat lut leti jiske baad class ki ekta mein sunaina mam ka badan aa jata aur ye ladke muth maar kar is chahat mein ki sunaina mam unhe apne badan ko chune dengi usi mein khush ho jaya karte. Padai ka kya tha vo to vaise bhi fail hone ke liye hi padte the.

" ab bata ki kaise hua ye sab? tu kya sochti rehti hai " megha chidte hue boli.

" bas yahi ki sunaina mam ne mujhe bulaya tha jaun ya nahi "

" itne to ladke nahi chahte sunaina mam ki jitna tu unhe nanga dekhna chahti hai "

" kya bol rahi hai "

" yahi ki usme ghusna band kar, vo tujhe nahi degi, she hates girl "

" tujhe kaise pata? vo bhi to ek girl hai? "

" girl ? "

" i mean aurat " supriya ne apni galti sudharte hue kaha.

" to ? mujhe kya pata "

" tujhe to sab pata hota hai "

" filal mujhe ye nahi pata ki tu us kamre mein kya kar rahi thi " megha ne chidte hue unchi awaz mein kaha jo class ke kuch bachon ne bhi suni hogi.

" dhire bol haramazadi " supriya ne muh par hath rakhte hue kaha.

" bata jaldi kya khel rach kar ayi hai kal tu ? " megha ne supriya ka hath hataya aur aram se kaha.

" yahan nahi, chal kahin aur chal kar batati hun " supriya batate hue ruki aur usne faisla liya ki sabke samne nahi balki akele mein baat karni padegi.

" acha chal, main janti hun ek jagah "

" kaun si? "

" tu chal to, aakash ke pass chal rahe hain " isse pehle guptaji class lene atte use pehle megha supriya ko lekar chal di.

" ye kahan layi hai? " college ke basment mein ghuste hi supriya boli.

" chal na tu " megha ne chabi se tala khola aur andar ghus gayi.

" kaun sa kamra hai ye " supriya andar ghusi to megha ne light jala di " sports room "

" han " megha ne darwaja lagate hue kaha.

" par iski chabi? " supriya ruki " tu aakash se chabi lene gayi thi? "

" han.. ab yahi apna adda hai meri jaan. Aakash ke hone ka thoda fayda to hume hona chahie tha " kursi par felte hue megha boli aur fir use achanak se yaad aya ki vo dono yahan kyun aye hain. " bata ab ki kya hua kal? kaise reh gaya tera phone us kamre mein ? " megha ke sawal ka jawab dena to tha hi par supriya kaise bolti isliye kamre ke charon taraf dekhte hue sochne lagi ki kaise shuruwat kare. Kamra jada bada nahi tha basement mein hone ki wajah se deeware seelan ke khatir galne jaisi halat mein ho gayi thi. Do-teen rack pade the jahan par khel ka saman rakha tha aur ek taraf kuch kitabein aur ek table do kursi jisme se ek par megha baithi thi.

" bolegi ab? " megha chid-chida rahi thi.

" tujhe mene bataya tha na ki tanu subah ragging le rahi thi "

" han to? "

" to jab tu aakash ke sath chali gayi to hostel jate time mujhe yaad aya ki tanu ne un dono ladkiyun ko apne kamre mein bulaya hai jiske bare mein tune mujhe bataya tha to main.... main bas usi kamre mein chali gayi thi aur fir wahan par " supriya ne us raat hui puri ghatna ke bare mein bataya, tanu aur uski doston ka koi aisi chiz ka lena jiske nashe se use chakar aye fir uska wahan fasna, fir phone ka band hona aur kamre se jis tarah bahar ayi jisme vo phone wahin bhool gayi " aur fir main andhere ke chalte roshni ka picha karte hue us khandar tak ja pahunchi jahan se tu mujhe layi " supriya ke batane par megha kuch nahi boli aur ek pal use ghurti rahi.

" megha... megha... " supriya ke awaz dene par megha ne apne per niche kiye aur kursi par aram se baith gayi.

" tujhe pata hai vo kya tha jiski wajah se tu behosh hui? "

" nahi "

" drugs supriya, drugs "

" kya? " supriya ghabra gayi.

" han aur agar warden ne tujhe bulaya hai to ye bilkul ho sakta hai ki vo us kamre mein gayi ho wahan ki haalat kharab dekh use kya kisi ko bhi yahi lagega ki wahan koi aya tha aur jab use tera phone mila to use yakeen ho gaya ki wahan koi maujud tha. Phone ke jariya use malum ho gaya ki vo tu hi thi jo wahan par maujud thi. Isliye usne tujhe aaj bulaya hai, tujhse puchne ke liye supriya ki tu wahan kya kar rahi thi, kyun ki use dar hai ki tujhe drugs wali baat na pata chal gayi ho kyun ki agar aisa hua to uski naukri to jayegi hi balki vo lamba jayegi vo alag "

" p..ar.. par.. vo to tanu thi na, isme warden kyun fasegi.. "

" tu bhi bachon wali baat karti hai, warden aur tanu alag hai? " megha ke bolne par supriya ne nah mein sar hilaya " to fir? tujhe kya lagta hai tanu ko drugs kaun deta hoga? Wahi warden deti hogi aur wahi deti aa rahi hogi. Lekin tu uske aur uske dhande ke bich aa gayi "

" ab? " supriya aur jada gahbra gayi.

" uppar se tu warden ke bulane par uske pass nahi gayi jise ye aur pukhta ho gaya ki tujhe jarur kuch maloom hai " megha ne apni baat puri karke supriya ko ghambhirta mein daal diya. Vo pareshan hone lagi aur use aisa laga jaise fir se kisi ne dharti ki sari hawa khinch li ho.

" supriya are you ok? " megha ke puchne par usne han mein sar hilaya. " tu chinta mat kar. Ye sab meri assumptions hai, ho sakta hai aisa nahi hua ho? " megha ki baat sun supriya ne uski taraf dekha. " ho sakta hai ki warden ko tera phone mil gaya ho to tu keh dio ki tu canteen mein bhool gayi thi uske baad pata nahi kahan gaya. Par tujhe use jakar milna hoga, tabhi to is chakar se bahar nikal sakti hai "

" par main? akeli "

" han akeli.. " megha ne supriya ko rasta to diya par akele jane ka dar supriya ke man se nikal nahi raha tha. Par koi aur chara na to uske pas tha aur na hi megha ke pas. Megha ko to supriya college mein hi chhod gayi aur khud hostel ki taraf chal di. Raste bhar uske man mein dar basa hua raha. Vo hostel pahunchi aur warden ke office ki taraf badhi. Use ajeeb ajeeb tarah ke khayal aa rahe the. Megha ne jaisa kaha tha vo wahi bolne wali thi aur apni baat se badalna nahi tha. " warden main andar aaun? " supriya ne darwaja halka sa hi khola aur wahin ruk gayi.
 

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Update ~~ 8

" may i come in mam? " supriya ne chalti class ko disturb kiya to har koi usi ki taraf dekhne laga. Supriya dusri class ke liye bhi late thi isliye jis tarah use sunaina mam ghur rahi thi vo ache se samajh rahi thi.

" you are? " sunaina mam ne board se thoda hatte hue pucha.

" Supriya, mam "

" first time class attend kar rahi ho? " supriya jawab mein kya bolti ki han aaj se pehle kabhi class nahi li aur sirf usne hi kya Megha ne hi kaha tha ki is teacher ki class nahi lenge. Kyun ki ye use jada sexy thi aur iske padate tym har ladka apni laar lund ke roop mein tapkate hue hilata hai. Isliye use na sunaina mam pasand nahi thi aur na hi uski class lena pasand tha jiski wajah se sirf pehli class ke baad kabhi koi class nahi li gayi. Par jab supriya ne megha ko class mein baitha dekha to usko samajh hi nahi aya ki is baat ka vo gussa kare ya fir bura mane. " helo? are you there? tumhari wajah se class khali baithi hai, kuch bologi? " supriya ne sunana mam ko dekha. Vo roz isi tarah ati thi, sarre aur slevless blouse. Kahani to inki bhi thi ek jo megha ne hostel mein batai thi. Sunaina mam isi college ki student hua karti thi aaj se koi 4-5 saal pehle aur apne time mein bahut hi jada kheli khilai aurat thi lekin teacher banne ke baad andaz badal gaya tha. Umar shadi ki ho chuki thi lekin abhi tak kunwari thi. Inke bare mein isliye itni jankari thi kyun ki ye girls hostel ke bagal mein bane apartments mein se ek flat mein rehti thi. Pehle to akele rehti thi lekin ab koi aur bhi rehta hai kaun ye koi nahi janta. Par megha hamesha hi kehti thi ki jitna marzi acha dikh le ye sunaina par chehre se hi ras tapkati hai. Aur iska chakar jarur college ke professor Sameer ke sath chal raha hai jahan dono sirf apas mein hi nahi balki kuch student bhi maujud hai jo sunaina se padne jate hain. Private home tution.
Are idhar bhi sunaina maidam :doh:
aur wo bhi tharki type ki... ya yeh bas us jalkuri megha ki hi soch bhar hai.. ki ushe ladke zyada bhav deti hai tharki megha ko nahi.. isliye supriya ke kaano mein ye ul fijul ki baatein daali ki sunaina maidam tharki hai :D

" hey you? say something or get out " sunaina mam ke chillane par supriya apni soch se bahar ayi.

" sorry mam. Actually tabiyat thodi down hai isliye... " supriya ko down nahi bolna chahie tha, sabhi ladke uski taraf dekh hans pade. Vo janti thi ki sabko malum hai ki down ka matlab hota hai periods.

" mene apka naam pucha tha ye nahi ki aap kitne din se down hai " sunaina mam gusse mein boli to class ke kuch ladke hans diye. " shut up " vo chillai jiske baad sabhi ki hansi ruk gayi.

" no mam, nahi ki " supriya ne nazre jhukate hue kaha.

" good, to tum mere sath aaj HOD se milne chalna unhe jawab dena ki kyun nahi li class tumne ab tak. Ab baitho andar " sunaina mam ne supriya ko adesh diya aur supriya jakar ek khali padi seat par jaa baithi. Sunaina mam ne padana shuru hi kiya tha ki unka phone baj utha aur supriya ko mauka mil gaya. " ragini tum idhar baith jaogi " megha ke sath baithi ladki se usne pucha to usne bina mane kiye piche wale ladke ke sath ja baithi aur supriya megha ke pas.
is sunaina punena ki to aisi ki taisi.. :bat:
iski ye mazal ki masoom supriya se is tarike se baat kare.. are kyun jaaye hod ke paas.. :bat:

" warden ne mujhe subah kisi kaam se bulaya tha aur main nahi gayi " supriya ki nazar samne thi kyun ki sunaina mam ne padhana shuru kar diya tha aur vo dusra mauka nahi dena chahti thi.

" warden ne tujhe kyun? " megha ke jawab mein kahin nahi tha ki vo gussa hai. " aur bulaya to bulaya tu gayi kyun nahi "

" dar ki wajah se "

" dar? kaisa dar "

" vo megha.. mene tujhse kal jhooth kaha tha " supriya ghabrate hue boli " kal mera phone vo us kamre mein reh gaya "

" kaunse kamre mein? "

" wahi... " supriya ek pal ke liye chup hui " tanu wale kamre mein "

" what the fucckk.... " megha ne supriya ki taraf hairani bhari nazron se dekha " tu wahan kya kar rahi thi " dabi awaz mein vo boli.

" vo main tujhe baad mein bataungi.. par agar vo phone unke hath lag gaya to ? " supriya ke chehre par dar saaf tha. Megha jawab deti use pehle sunaina mam ki annoncement ne dono ka dhayan us taraf modh diya.

" everyonne needs to prepare Chapter 1-5 for the upcoming Internal test which is going to be next week. So be prepared, warna punishment guptaji denge "

" par mam 5 chapters? abhi to hum first par hi hain aur " ek bache bol utha.

" Main tum logon ko first panch chapter padha rahi hun wahi badi baat hai varna ye sab tum apne school se padh kar aye ho. So don't be dumb and start recalling your previous studies "

" par mam "

" if you have any problem talk to HOD please " sunaina mam ne apna saman uthaya aur chalti bani. Un sabhi baton mein ye khas baat thi sunaina mam ki vo kabhi bhi course ko padha kar khatam nahi karti thi balki bina padaye hi khatam kar diya karti thi kai baar kosish ki class ne ki unke khilaf complain kar sake lekin na jane unhe ye baat kaise pata chal jati aur uske baad vo apne badan se class mein ladkon ki izat lut leti jiske baad class ki ekta mein sunaina mam ka badan aa jata aur ye ladke muth maar kar is chahat mein ki sunaina mam unhe apne badan ko chune dengi usi mein khush ho jaya karte. Padai ka kya tha vo to vaise bhi fail hone ke liye hi padte the.
ye sunaina punena kuch thik nahi lag rahi hai... jarur villain ke sath mili huyi hai ye..
hmm... koi to bahot bada Saryanta rach rahe honge villain logis.. jisme ye sunaina punena bhi samil hai.. :bat:
bholi supriya se dur rehne ka sunaina punena... warna.. :bat:
" ab bata ki kaise hua ye sab? tu kya sochti rehti hai " megha chidte hue boli.

" bas yahi ki sunaina mam ne mujhe bulaya tha jaun ya nahi "

" itne to ladke nahi chahte sunaina mam ki jitna tu unhe nanga dekhna chahti hai "

" kya bol rahi hai "

" yahi ki usme ghusna band kar, vo tujhe nahi degi, she hates girl "

" tujhe kaise pata? vo bhi to ek girl hai? "

" girl ? "

" i mean aurat " supriya ne apni galti sudharte hue kaha.

" to ? mujhe kya pata "

" tujhe to sab pata hota hai "

" filal mujhe ye nahi pata ki tu us kamre mein kya kar rahi thi " megha ne chidte hue unchi awaz mein kaha jo class ke kuch bachon ne bhi suni hogi.

" dhire bol haramazadi " supriya ne muh par hath rakhte hue kaha.

" bata jaldi kya khel rach kar ayi hai kal tu ? " megha ne supriya ka hath hataya aur aram se kaha.

" yahan nahi, chal kahin aur chal kar batati hun " supriya batate hue ruki aur usne faisla liya ki sabke samne nahi balki akele mein baat karni padegi.

" acha chal, main janti hun ek jagah "

" kaun si? "

" tu chal to, aakash ke pass chal rahe hain " isse pehle guptaji class lene atte use pehle megha supriya ko lekar chal di.

" ye kahan layi hai? " college ke basment mein ghuste hi supriya boli.

" chal na tu " megha ne chabi se tala khola aur andar ghus gayi.

" kaun sa kamra hai ye " supriya andar ghusi to megha ne light jala di " sports room "

" han " megha ne darwaja lagate hue kaha.

" par iski chabi? " supriya ruki " tu aakash se chabi lene gayi thi? "

" han.. ab yahi apna adda hai meri jaan. Aakash ke hone ka thoda fayda to hume hona chahie tha " kursi par felte hue megha boli aur fir use achanak se yaad aya ki vo dono yahan kyun aye hain. " bata ab ki kya hua kal? kaise reh gaya tera phone us kamre mein ? " megha ke sawal ka jawab dena to tha hi par supriya kaise bolti isliye kamre ke charon taraf dekhte hue sochne lagi ki kaise shuruwat kare. Kamra jada bada nahi tha basement mein hone ki wajah se deeware seelan ke khatir galne jaisi halat mein ho gayi thi. Do-teen rack pade the jahan par khel ka saman rakha tha aur ek taraf kuch kitabein aur ek table do kursi jisme se ek par megha baithi thi.

" bolegi ab? " megha chid-chida rahi thi.

" tujhe mene bataya tha na ki tanu subah ragging le rahi thi "

" han to? "

" to jab tu aakash ke sath chali gayi to hostel jate time mujhe yaad aya ki tanu ne un dono ladkiyun ko apne kamre mein bulaya hai jiske bare mein tune mujhe bataya tha to main.... main bas usi kamre mein chali gayi thi aur fir wahan par " supriya ne us raat hui puri ghatna ke bare mein bataya, tanu aur uski doston ka koi aisi chiz ka lena jiske nashe se use chakar aye fir uska wahan fasna, fir phone ka band hona aur kamre se jis tarah bahar ayi jisme vo phone wahin bhool gayi " aur fir main andhere ke chalte roshni ka picha karte hue us khandar tak ja pahunchi jahan se tu mujhe layi " supriya ke batane par megha kuch nahi boli aur ek pal use ghurti rahi.

" megha... megha... " supriya ke awaz dene par megha ne apne per niche kiye aur kursi par aram se baith gayi.

" tujhe pata hai vo kya tha jiski wajah se tu behosh hui? "

" nahi "

" drugs supriya, drugs "

" kya? " supriya ghabra gayi.

" han aur agar warden ne tujhe bulaya hai to ye bilkul ho sakta hai ki vo us kamre mein gayi ho wahan ki haalat kharab dekh use kya kisi ko bhi yahi lagega ki wahan koi aya tha aur jab use tera phone mila to use yakeen ho gaya ki wahan koi maujud tha. Phone ke jariya use malum ho gaya ki vo tu hi thi jo wahan par maujud thi. Isliye usne tujhe aaj bulaya hai, tujhse puchne ke liye supriya ki tu wahan kya kar rahi thi, kyun ki use dar hai ki tujhe drugs wali baat na pata chal gayi ho kyun ki agar aisa hua to uski naukri to jayegi hi balki vo lamba jayegi vo alag "

" p..ar.. par.. vo to tanu thi na, isme warden kyun fasegi.. "

" tu bhi bachon wali baat karti hai, warden aur tanu alag hai? " megha ke bolne par supriya ne nah mein sar hilaya " to fir? tujhe kya lagta hai tanu ko drugs kaun deta hoga? Wahi warden deti hogi aur wahi deti aa rahi hogi. Lekin tu uske aur uske dhande ke bich aa gayi "

" ab? " supriya aur jada gahbra gayi.

" uppar se tu warden ke bulane par uske pass nahi gayi jise ye aur pukhta ho gaya ki tujhe jarur kuch maloom hai " megha ne apni baat puri karke supriya ko ghambhirta mein daal diya. Vo pareshan hone lagi aur use aisa laga jaise fir se kisi ne dharti ki sari hawa khinch li ho.

" supriya are you ok? " megha ke puchne par usne han mein sar hilaya. " tu chinta mat kar. Ye sab meri assumptions hai, ho sakta hai aisa nahi hua ho? " megha ki baat sun supriya ne uski taraf dekha. " ho sakta hai ki warden ko tera phone mil gaya ho to tu keh dio ki tu canteen mein bhool gayi thi uske baad pata nahi kahan gaya. Par tujhe use jakar milna hoga, tabhi to is chakar se bahar nikal sakti hai "

" par main? akeli "

" han akeli.. " megha ne supriya ko rasta to diya par akele jane ka dar supriya ke man se nikal nahi raha tha. Par koi aur chara na to uske pas tha aur na hi megha ke pas. Megha ko to supriya college mein hi chhod gayi aur khud hostel ki taraf chal di. Raste bhar uske man mein dar basa hua raha. Vo hostel pahunchi aur warden ke office ki taraf badhi. Use ajeeb ajeeb tarah ke khayal aa rahe the. Megha ne jaisa kaha tha vo wahi bolne wali thi aur apni baat se badalna nahi tha. " warden main andar aaun? " supriya ne darwaja halka sa hi khola aur wahin ruk gayi.
O teri wo tharki budhiya warden tanu se mili huyi hai.. matlab lesbo bhi hai.. nashe ki saman supply bhi karti hai hai wo hawasi warden..
kya yaar.. supriya to fansh hi gayi.. are kya jarurat thi mobile udhar chhod aane ki :doh:
Haan yeh idea thik hai.. keh degi ki mobile ghum ho gaya tha.. shayad shaq ki ghere mein na aaye phir... par savdhaani baratni hogi supriya ko aage se..
Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills harshit ji :applause: :applause:
 

Naina

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Shadi me bade fufi ka role me hai kya madam jo jibh dikha rahi... Kahani padhne ke liye reader ko bulana hoga... He to ghor kalyug hai :D
Hmmm...
Champ bhai :hug: ... Akki ❸❸❸ javab dega nahi kyonki wo aadhe ghante me 3 baar mere comment dekha hoga... 4 baat reply type karke delete kiya hoga anth me kaha hoga... Ignore karo... Aur yahi hua hai :D

kamdev99008 babu ek baar comment chhod sakte hain story par karna, lekin unki najar jab bhi unse puchhe sawal par hogi.. apne vichar jaroor denge... Aa chuka hai unka reply dekh lijiye...

Baki Naina ji hain ... Javab na aaya hoga to muh me ungli daal kar javab nikal legi... Jaise bhi ho ghuma'kar... Aaj nahi 5 saal baad... Kisi fifkarti Nagin ke badle ki tarah jawab niakwaye bina focus nahi hatayegi...

Nothing personal haan .. mere personal openion hai.. smile plz :D
Aur sachhe readers woh jo sachhe dil se kahani ke ant tak writer ka sath nibhaye..
(nothing personal, just a simple opinion ;))
ismile plz :D
 

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Are idhar bhi sunaina maidam :doh:
aur wo bhi tharki type ki... ya yeh bas us jalkuri megha ki hi soch bhar hai.. ki ushe ladke zyada bhav deti hai tharki megha ko nahi.. isliye supriya ke kaano mein ye ul fijul ki baatein daali ki sunaina maidam tharki hai :D

is sunaina punena ki to aisi ki taisi.. :bat:
iski ye mazal ki masoom supriya se is tarike se baat kare.. are kyun jaaye hod ke paas.. :bat:

ye sunaina punena kuch thik nahi lag rahi hai... jarur villain ke sath mili huyi hai ye..
hmm... koi to bahot bada Saryanta rach rahe honge villain logis.. jisme ye sunaina punena bhi samil hai.. :bat:
bholi supriya se dur rehne ka sunaina punena... warna.. :bat:

O teri wo tharki budhiya warden tanu se mili huyi hai.. matlab lesbo bhi hai.. nashe ki saman supply bhi karti hai hai wo hawasi warden..
kya yaar.. supriya to fansh hi gayi.. are kya jarurat thi mobile udhar chhod aane ki :doh:
Haan yeh idea thik hai.. keh degi ki mobile ghum ho gaya tha.. shayad shaq ki ghere mein na aaye phir... par savdhaani baratni hogi supriya ko aage se..
Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills harshit ji :applause: :applause:
Han yahan bhi madam hai maal yani :D ab kahani ki shuruwat hi aisi hai kya karein... :redface: thodi bore slow hai aur abhi thodi track par aa rahi hai. Kahani meko bhi malum nahi kya ho raha hai bas ho raha hai :D villian se sunaina mili hai ya actually mein sunaina villan hai ye to nahi malum... :D Pata nahi vo megha ka ek tukka hai, sahi hai kya nahi ye to aage hi pata chalega :D Thanks naina ji :hug: :bow: keep reading..... :bow:
nice update ..sunaina mam ke bhi charche hai college me 😁..
sexy adaao se ladko ko rijhati hai par deti kuch nahi 🤣🤣..
supriya ko mobile ka darr hai ki kahi wo warden ke haath naa lag gaya ho par us kamre me koi jaat nahi jaldi siwaay tannu ke aur uske saathi ..
megha ne jo assumption kiya hai wo sach hai ki nahi dekhte hai 🤔🤔..
Thank you bhai :D har engineering college mein kisi na kisi ke charche hote hain... Are tez aurat hai bhat.. pata nahi kya ka karti hai... Aage malum hoga vo :smokin:
 

Naina

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Han yahan bhi madam hai maal yani :D ab kahani ki shuruwat hi aisi hai kya karein... :redface: thodi bore slow hai aur abhi thodi track par aa rahi hai. Kahani meko bhi malum nahi kya ho raha hai bas ho raha hai :D villian se sunaina mili hai ya actually mein sunaina villan hai ye to nahi malum... :D Pata nahi vo megha ka ek tukka hai, sahi hai kya nahi ye to aage hi pata chalega :D Thanks naina ji :hug: :bow: keep reading..... :bow:
Chudail sunaina maidam :D
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