Fantasy " Girls Hostel " { Completed }

[harshit1890]

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Chapter 1 ~~ " Supriya "​

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Chapter ~~ 4 " A True Face "​

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Chapter ~~ 5 " The Antiquarian "​

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Chapter ~~ 6 " The Amazon "​

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Finale Chapter 7 : " Book Of Hoax "​

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सच में , यह पुरी स्टोरी दिमाग के परखच्चे उड़ाए जा रही है । कभी लगता है कहानी में सस्पेंस है तो कभी लगता है भ्रम जाल का ताना-बाना बुना हुआ है तो कभी लगता है जैसे कोई रूहानी ताकतें हैं तो कभी लगता है यह सिंपल स्टोरी है जिसमें आरूहि एक गम्भीर बिमारी से पीड़ित है ।

मुझे लगता है इससे बेहतरीन कहानी फिलहाल तो इस फोरम पर नहीं है । और सबसे बड़ी खासियत है आपके लिखने का स्टाइल और अंदाज । आउटस्टैंडिंग हर्षित भाई ।

thoos thoos ke khana khaya aaruhi ne jo ekdam majedar horror type scene tha ..

सही में , हर्षित भाई ! मुझे बहुत ही दया आने लगा है आरूहि पर । अगर किसी हरामखोर की वजह से उसकी हालत ऐसी हुई है तो उसे जहन्नुम का रास्ता जरूर दिखला दिजियेगा ।

WTF!!! Yahi pehla reaction nikalta hai is kahani ko poora padhne ke baad... Halanki pehle bhi maine is kahani ke kuchh 7-8 updates padhe huye the par jab is baar padhna shuru kiya to ek naya sa romanch har beet te update ke saath banta gaya... Bohot hi zyada behatreen tareeke se likhi gayi kahani hai ye, ab jis prakaar ka plot imagine kiya hai lekhak saahab ne uske baad ek nausikhiya bhi likhe to bhi kahani halki nahi ho sakti, aur yahaan jis level ka narration, aur scene specialization hame padhne ko mila hai, wo kaafi hai dikhane ke liye that this is, without a doubt,one of the finest stories available on XF... Chahe wo running stories hon ya fir completed, aur chahe future mein likhi jaane waali kahaniyan, is story ka ek alag hi sthaan bana rehne waala hai forum par... Aur iske liye writer saahab ki jitni bhi tareef ki jaaye wo kam hi hogi...

Fantasy genre ke saath shuru huyi ye kahani, kab alag - alag genres ke darshan karane lagi padhte waqt katayi pata nahi chala... Horror, Suspense, Thriller, Adventure, Romance and of course Fantasy, aur saath hi mein Erotica ke ansh bhi... Ek story mein is se zyada kis cheez ki apeksha kar sakta hai reader!? Again, one of the best stories I've ever read... Outstanding Stuff harshit1890 bhai...

Kya hi khubsurat kahani likhi hai aapne bhai... I'm just speechless, jitni bhi tareef karunga kam hi hogi... Erotica ka bhi bilkul sahi situation mein use Kiya gaya hai aur sabse important har kirdaar par lekhak ki shaandar pakad bani rahi hai... Har character ka kahani mein hona justify kiya gaya hai, kahin bhi koyi bhi character bina matlab nahi ghus aaya...

Ab dekhna ye hai ke Mehta waali meeting mein kaun kaun shaamil tha aur unka maksad kya tha? Aur Shruti is sab ki sachayi jaan bhi paayegi ya nahi? Aruhi sach mein kisi beemari ka shikaar hai ya kewal naatak kar rahi hai? At last, Ek baar ko apun ko ye bhi laga ke asal mein ye sab jo ho raha hai wo kewal Shruti ki kalpana hai...

Outstanding Story & Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...

Harshit bhai... Kayi horror stories padhi hain maine, joki poori tarah se horror genre par based hain but jis tarah ka scene aap create karte ho, taking into note ye story horror genre par based hai bhi nahi, that's phenomenal...

meghnath naam rakhne ke pichhe ki kahani bhi majedar hai ..
jab me TV nahi dekhta( waise tha nahi nahi ghar par ) tha bachpan me aur bas naam suna karta tha to khudko SHAKTI KAPOOR. kehta tha dosto ke bich ..ye kissa padhke bachpan ki yaade taaza ho gayi ..

Slowly my interest is increasing towards the story full of adventure, fun to read, no doubt you are a great writer, thank you for writing such a beautiful story.

Have to admit, your story completely twists the thinking, sometimes it seems in the mind that it is just a disease and sometimes it seems like something supernatural. Your writing is commendable, even after writing this much there are many questions and there will be many such points which I have missed. In some scenes there was a combination of intensity as well as erotic scenes, which you have shown very well, what should I say now, now the words of praise are over understand my feelings.
harshit1890 Hats Off... enjoyed it.

but why were you making her nude everytime in front of everyone.

मुझे नहीं लगता दुनिया में कोई भी ऐसा माई का माल होगा जिसे इस कहानी की पहेली समझ में आ रही हो। गजब का दिमाग हिला रखा है आपने हर्षित भाई।

The whole incident, that Mansion one was written so beautifully that no words are sufficient to describe it! Ismein koyi doraye nahin ki maine aaj tak kisi ko bhi is tarah ka horror likhte nahi dekha hai... Haunted ko read kiya tha maine, kaafi pehle, aur main bilkul daave se keh sakta hoon, that you're the best,when it comes to generating real fear in readers, while they read the story..

Bhatt the phakk is this estory?

 

[Death Kiñg]

Kaise ho harshit1890 bhai..? Hope ab kaam ka pressure kamm hua hoga.

 

[harshit1890]

Kaise ho harshit1890 bhai..? Hope ab kaam ka pressure kamm hua hoga.

Kahan bhai.. ghar ki grehasti aur naukri..... Schedule ek dum packam-pack hai.. time mila to kahani chapne aa gaya.. Aap bato kaise ho?

 

[Death Kiñg]

Kahan bhai.. ghar ki grehasti aur naukri..... Schedule ek dum packam-pack hai.. time mila to kahani chapne aa gaya.. Aap bato kaise ho?

My answer is also the same. No difference.

 

[harshit1890]

My answer is also the same. No difference.

Sabka yahi haal hai. Covid wala WFH sabse best tha.. aram se kahaniya likhne wala

 

[Death Kiñg]

Sabka yahi haal hai. Covid wala WFH sabse best tha.. aram se kahaniya likhne wala

Has already started to sound like nostalgia. Wo din bhi kya din the.

 

[harshit1890]

Has already started to sound like nostalgia. Wo din bhi kya din the.

Egjactly... ab to bht kaam karna padta hai

 

[GuptAbhishek]

Thanks to coming back harshit bhai iss story ko complete krke hi chorna ye story meko aapne hi suggest ki thi read krne ko to ab aapka hi farz hai ki ye Puri ho or thoda jaldi ho to sone pe suhaga kafi wait krwa diya aapne iss update ko Dene me mai everyday aake refresh krke check krta hu ki update aaya ki nahi sat or Sun me busy tha or usi time aapne update diya as usual story achi hai to update automatic ache hone hi hai or writer jb aap ho to Shak ki koi gunjayish hi nhi hai iss update ko padhne k baad ab next update ka wait jyada nahi kr paunga to jaldi de dena


Bich bich me Jo horror ka tadka daal re ho wahi to Mera fav scenes hai bas dekhna ye hai ki ye story horror suspense hai ya only thriller wese shreyas wala part padhne k baad me to chahta hu ye story haunted story ka prequel ho or shreyas ki kahani se jude


Baki let's see

Keep writing keep rocking


Waiting for next update

 

[harshit1890]

Thanks to coming back harshit bhai iss story ko complete krke hi chorna ye story meko aapne hi suggest ki thi read krne ko to ab aapka hi farz hai ki ye Puri ho or thoda jaldi ho to sone pe suhaga kafi wait krwa diya aapne iss update ko Dene me mai everyday aake refresh krke check krta hu ki update aaya ki nahi sat or Sun me busy tha or usi time aapne update diya as usual story achi hai to update automatic ache hone hi hai or writer jb aap ho to Shak ki koi gunjayish hi nhi hai iss update ko padhne k baad ab next update ka wait jyada nahi kr paunga to jaldi de dena


Bich bich me Jo horror ka tadka daal re ho wahi to Mera fav scenes hai bas dekhna ye hai ki ye story horror suspense hai ya only thriller wese shreyas wala part padhne k baad me to chahta hu ye story haunted story ka prequel ho or shreyas ki kahani se jude


Baki let's see

Keep writing keep rocking


Waiting for next update

Bhai jaldi wali to samsya hai. Mai khud complete krna chahta hu, tbhi samay milte hi likhne baith jata hu lekin ab shadi ke baad possible nai ho pata. Divorce thdi krwana hai nayi nayi shadi ka

Kahani khatam jarur hgi. Kab hogi cant say but hgi latak latak kr hi hogi. Samay lagega aur os chakar mei khud editing kr rha hu kahani ke andr taki pata bi na chale aur kahani smoothly end ho. But patience rkhna hi pdega.

Jab mauka milega fir milunga. Thanks for reading...

 

[KEKIUS MAXIMUS]

romanchak update ..darawane mahaul me pahuch gaye aur meghnath nahi mila ,aur mandoza bhi aadhe me chhodke bhag gaya .. aur yaha teeno ki halat kharab ki koi unka kidnap na kar le .
aaruhi ne jyada jawab nahi diya shruti ke sawalo ka par clue de diya ki meghnath ne kuch bataya hoga aur vishal ko yaad aa gaya boat ka naam .
shruti bolna bahut kuch chahti thi meghnath se par nahi bola ..

amazon ka jungle tour ekdam mast tarike se explain kiya hai ..aur unki baate ki jungle sabko kha jata hai .

aaruhi par bahut se iljam laga diye shruti ne par aaruhi kuch nahi boli par ye raat ka matter bahut darawana aur shocking tha ,kya shruti ko bhi aaruhi jaise bimari ho gayi hai jo usne raat me pant gili kar di aur dopahar tak soti rahi .. kya wo sapna tha ya hakikat .

ab pahuch to gaye par kitab ka pitara leke kitna chal pate hai ,koi jaanwar na mil jaaye ,pehle hi halat patli ho rakhi hai ..
aur is boatwale ko lalach to de diya par agar khazana na mila to ..

 

[Mr.AK]

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Gaggan aur rachna, rachna aur gaggan, nahi-nahi nahi... Ye combination kaise? Mana rachna noor ki apsara nahi thi par gaggan se? Yakeen nahi hota, kahin mujhe juth bolne ke liye to gaggan ka naam to nahi le liya? Kya pata lafda vishal se hi chal raha ho. Ho sakta hai ab iski confirmation to mujhe gaggan se hi leni padegi par kya pata vo bhi mila hua ho vishal se? Sala aaj kisi ki shakal se to bharosa hota hi nahi varna Miss Nandini ki shakal se koi bata sakta hai ki vo Dr. Alok se hum sabki maujudgi mein uske farmhouse par sex kar rahi thi. Agar vishal ne mere se pehle rachna ki li to usko to main aisa sabak sikhaungi ki hamesha yaad rakhega. Shruti hostel pahunchte hue soch mein dubi hui thi. Kamre ki taraf badhi to paya ki kamre ki kundi theek ho chuki thi. Sala debu ke naam se to warden ki fatne lagi hai. Use apne uppar fakr tha. Usne kiwad khola aur andar dekhte hi uske kadam wahin ruk gaye. Samne aaruhi baithi thi bistar par ukhdu hokar, baal aage ki taraf uske chehre ko chupa rahe the isi ke sath vo bistar par halke-halke aage-piche ho rahi thi.

" Ye kya nayi bakchodi hai... " shruti ka dil zoron se dhadak utha. Uske dimag mein kai baatein ek sath chal padi. Pehli kya koi atma aaruhi ke andar ghus gayi hai, bhoot ki kahaniyun mein kuch aisa hi suna hai usne hamesha se. Usne fauran apni soch badli aur use laga ki Dr alok ki di gayi dawaiyun ka koi side effect hai aur fauran use phone karke unhe batana chahie. Iske baad vo kuch sochti use pehle uske kadam kamre ke andar bade aur ek ajeeb si mehak uski naak mein ghusi. Usne naak sikod-sikod kar ache se us mehak ko sungha. Ajeeb si gandh thi vo, jaise jaise " nashe ki badbu hai " usne apni ankhon se idhar udhar dekha, kahin kuch pada hai ya jal raha hai. Bahut khoja par use wahan khade rehkar kuch nahi dikha. Vo ek pal aage ki taraf ayi, vaise to use aaruhi ke najdeek ane mein hi ghabrahat ho rahi thi lekin vo fir bhi aage badhi, har baar kuch naya le ati hai ye ladki. Man hi man bolte hi vo aage badhi aur uski naak mein vo mehak bhi badne lagi. Mehak aaruhi ke bistar ke niche se hi aa rahi thi isliye usne khane ko apne bistar par rakha aur bed ke niche jhanka jahan jhankte hi use khansi uth gayi " ukhun. " khanste hue usne sar uppar kiya aur fir nazre niche ki, koi chiz jal rahi thi aur mehak usi mein se aa rahi thi. Usne bina muh niche kiye us chiz ko dhayan se bahar nikala aur apni naak se dur karke dekhne lagi.

" Ye bala kya hai... " bidi type bana hua tha jiska ek hissa jal raha tha aur jalte hue jo dhuain usme se nikal raha tha vo mehak usi mein se aa rahi thi. Shruti ne use zameen par fainka aur fauran khidki khol kar wapis kamre ke bahar taraf ate hue pankha chalaya taki dhuain bahar jaa sake. Tabhi use yaad aya ki kamre ka darwaja khula hai agar kisi ne use aise dekh liya to gadbad ho jayegi. Usne kiwad lagaya aur aaruhi ki taraf mudi, vo abhi bhi usi tarah hil rahi thi. Bhoot hi ghusa hai pakka, no doubt. Ya fir dual personality wali bimari. Ya fir wahi hai jo ise aisa karne ko keh raha hai han yahi hoga Dr Alok ne kaha tha is bimari mein insan wahi karta hai jo use kaha jata hai karne ko. Dr. Alok ko dikhana padega aaruhi ka ye avtar. Shruti ne phone nikala aur ek ke baad ek do-teen photo alag-alag angle se khinch li, isi ke sath usne kuch second ki video bhi record kar li. Abhi uske samne do guthi thi ek aaruhi ka is kadar baithte hue hilna aur dusra us chiz ka jalna jise ajeeb mehak aa rahi thi.

" bhuja dun? " vo bad-badati hui aage badhi aur usne apne per se us jal rahi bidi type role ko per se daba kar bhuja diya. Vo aaruhi ke theek bagal mein thi, itni pas ki agar aaruhi ne kisi chudail ki tarah apna hath aage karke use pakda to vo bhag nahi payegi. Vo abhi bhi yun hi hil rahi thi, aage piche, aage piche. Sach mein agar ye sab raat ko hua hota to pakka chikh nikal jati. Aaj se puri rajai odh kar soungi, ye jo marzi kare ispar nazar dalungi hi nahi varna meri to gaand faad degi ye ladki. Kaisi chutiya kismat hai, chut dene ayi thi aur offer mein gand bhi deni padh rahi hai.

" aaruhi.. aaruhi.. " fusfusate hue usne sidhe khade reh kar hi aaruhi ko awaz di lekin kya faiyda tha vo repsonse hi nahi kar rahi thi " rehne de.. mat laga ise awaz, pade rehne de aise, hamesha ki tarah vapis normal ho jayegi... Ye dr alok ne dawai di hai ya fir pagal ko badhava dene ki goli, ulta asar kar rahi hai sali.. aaruhi sun rahi hai.. main hun.. teri dost.. " vo fir fus-fusai par is baar bhi koi jawab nahi. Usne apne galle se thuk niche utara aur thoda jhuk kar aaruhi ke aur najdeek jakar usne awaz di " aaruhi... aaarruuuhiiiiiii " awaz lagane ke baad itni khamoshi cha gayi ki use apne dil ki dhadkan sunai de rahi thi itna hi nahi uske sath use kuch 'humming' sunai de rahi thi, ek pal laga bagal walle kamre se ganne ki awaz aa rahi hai jo deewaron ki wajah se dab chuki hai lekin jab usne dhayan se suna to vo aaruhi se hi aa rahi thi. Use kuch ajeeb sa laga lekin janne ki ichukta uske andar badh gayi ki aaruhi kaisi 'humming' kar rahi hai. Usne apne kaan uske aur najdeek kar diye, mano honton ke pas hi le jana chahti ho.
Aaruhi abhi bhi waise hi hil rahi thi aur uske hilne ki wajah se uske baal ab shruti ke kano ko chu rahe the, Shruti ki nazar khidki ki taraf thi aur kaan aaruhi ki taraf. Vo dhayan laga kar aaruhi se nikalti 'humming' ko sunna chahti thi lekin vo abhi samajh pati use pehle aaruhi piche ki taraf gir gayi. Bistar par aaruhi ke girne ki awaz ate hi shruti ghabra kar sidhi khadi ho gayi. Uske hath per ek pal ke liye kamp uthe. Usne aaruhi ki taraf dekha jo ankhein band karke aram se laiti hui thi. Uske bikhre hue baal jab chehre se hatte to shruti ne uske chehre par nazar dali. Chehre par kisi bhi tarah ka koi badlav nahi tha, han honth jarur uske sukhe hue lag rahe the baki chehre ko dekh kar aisa lag raha tha mano kuch hua hi na ho. Ek pal shruti waise hi khadi sochti rahi, ajeeb ghatnao mein ye ghatna bhi shamil thi. Usne apne per bidi type walle roll se per hataya aur use uthaya jo ab bhuj chuka tha.

" ye akhir jal kya raha tha " usne behad najdeek se use sungha, mehak thi par pehle jaisi nahi. Vo apni jagah par baithi aur table par us bidi ke roll ko kholne lagi. Bidi khulte hi usne dekha ek podwer ke sath kuch mila hua tha safed-brown mote danne jaise the. Shruti ne ek bar use dekha, tambaku jaisa lag raha hai par tambaku jaisi smell to nahi thi. Shruti ne sochte hue ungli ki tip par halka sa use lagaya aur jaban par rakh diya.

" chiii.. yuk... kitna ganda taste hai iska... " usne fauran hath jhada aur pani pii liya. " chii abhi tak swad nahi jaa raha iska.. urrrrrrrr.... " usne apne muh aise hilaya mano jaise kitna ajeeb sa ho gaya uske andar. Usne aur pani piya, gat-gat karti hui vo adhi se jada bottle pani pii gayi tab jakar use halka sa chain mila. " kya ajeeb chiz hai thi, kya hai ye? aur kahan se ayi jo aaruhi ke bed ke niche jal rahi thi? " Shruti ka dimag chalne laga. Kya koi uske piche se kamre mein aya tha? Lock han.. lock sahi tha kamre ka to ho sakta hai vo bihari aya ho yahan par uski bidi room mein, vo bhi aaruhi ke bed ke niche kaise? Kya aaruhi yahan thi? Ya jab vo aya hoga to aaruhi ko usne aise hi dekha hoga jiski wajah se uske hath se ye bidi gir gayi hogi aur bed ke niche chali gayi hogi. Yani usne aaruhi ko is halat mein dekh liya? Shruti ko is baat ki puri sambhavna dikhai de rahi thi. Par use ye samajh nahi aa raha tha ki bihari aisi chiz hostel mein din ke ujale mein pii kaise raha tha. Koi dekh kar warden ko bata deta to uske to kya hota? Kya use baat ka dar nahi tha? Ya fir vo kuch aur chakkar hai. Ise sambhal kar rakhti hun, puchti hun ki akhir ye chiz hai kya, tambaku to nahi lag rahi yani koi aur chiz hai jiska milna asan nahi. Shruti ne fauran us roll ko wapis waisa hi kiya jaise vo tha aur use bed ke kinare mein fansa diya aur uske uppar se chaddar dal di.

Ye sab karte hi use yaad aya ki use bhook lag rahi hai, usne khana khola aur thoda chhod kar baki ka kha gayi. Bathroom mein jakar usne hath dhoya aur wahan dekha ki kapde dhulne ke liye pade the. Pani sahi se aa raha tha aur sahi se nali mein jaa bhi raha tha. Vo bathroom se jaise hi bahar nikli vo fir chaunk gayi. Aaruhi ek taraf ko bed par baithi kisi janwar ki tarah khane mein lagi thi. Hath muh pura sabzi se sana tha aur itna bada-bada ghassa kha rahi thi mano janwar ho.

" aaruhi..? " shruti ne awaz di.

" uhmm... " aaruhi ne uski taraf nazre ki aur fir khane lagi.

" kaise kha rahi hai? " shruti hichakte hue boli.

" bhook lagi hai... " itna bol vo khati gayi aur usne sarre dabbe saaf kar diye. Shruti tab tak wahin khadi rahi, uske samajh se bahar jaa raha tha. Khate hi aaruhi bistar par padh gayi aur lambi lambi ahein bharne lagi.

" tu theek hai? " shruti uski awaz sunte hue boli.

" mujhe kya hua? " usne apna sar uppar ki taraf uthaya jiske sath uski pith bhi thodi uthi. Uske honth ke charaon taraf sabzi lagi hui thi aur usi tarah uski hateli se lekar uske forearm tak sab gande the.

" hath muh to dho le.. aise hi laiti rahegi ... " shruti ke kehte hi aaruhi ek pal use ghurti rahi aur fir apni jagah se khadi hui. Aaruhi jaise jaise shruti ke najdeek aa rahi thi, uska dil zoron se dhadak raha tha. Vo shruti ke najdeek ayi, itni najdeek ki do inch ki duri par dono ke honth apas mein mil jate. Usne shruti ko ek-tuk ghura aur fir bathroom ke andar ghus gayi. Bathroom ka darwaja band hote hi shruti ne gehri sans khinchi par tabhi bathroom ka darwaja khula aur aaruhi ne apna sar bahar nikal kar ek lambi muskan de di jiski wajah se uske khane se sane dant shruti ko dikhne lage. Vo kuch bolti use pehle aaruhi ne fauran darwaja band kar diya.

" Kya bhayanak ladki hai ye.. " usne apne sine par hath rakha aur bistar ki taraf ayi. Use apna dhayan batana tha warna aaruhi ki muskan uski ankhon ke samne se jaa hi nahi rahi thi. Usne phone uthaya aur vishal ko message karne lagi aur usi dauran uska last scene dikha jo kal raat ka tha jise dekh use yaad aya ki uska phone to kharab hai. Par vo kya kare, jise uska dhayan hatte. Vo abhi aisa soch hi rahi thi ki bathroom ka darwaja khula aur aaruhi bahar ayi angdai lete hue.

" aaahh--- maza aa gaya.. kya khana tha.. kahan se layi thi.. bade dino baad itna acha khaya " aaruhi ne apne baal piche kiye aur bistar par aa baithi

" tu theek hai? " shruti ke muh se nikal gaya.

" hamesha yahi puchti rehti hai.. mujhe kya hua hai? "

" nahi vo aise hi puch rahi thi kyun ki tu kabhi tarif nahi karti na "

" han.. han.. main to bahut jalim hun tere liye .. ayi badii.. " aaruhi ne fauran tans khasa aur apna phone lekar lait gayi. Shruti ek pal use aise hi dekhti rahi aur vo bhi lait gayi. Laitte sath hi usne FB login kiya jispar ek hi user ke bahut sarre message aye hue the. Usne chat box khola aur message read karne lagi. Shruti dwara bheja gaya last message jisme usne kache ke ubhar wali photo bheji thi uske tehat hi reply aye hue the.

' This is a real photo? , itna mota? , really? , bolo?, batao na, kab bataoge?, jhootha to nahi hai na ye? Kab bataoge?, waiting to know this? ' Ye sabhi message alag-alag time ke kiye gaye the. Message padte hi shruti ke chehre par lambi muskan ter ayi. Usne message ka reply dena shuru kiya.

" Do you like it? " usne ye message likh kar wait kiya. " Do you wanna have this? " message dalne ke baad use laga ki bahut jaldi vo yahan tak pahunch gayi. Use thoda wait nahi karna chahie tha? Vo abhi soch hi rahi thi ki tabhi usne dekha ki vo online aa gayi hai aur shayad vo uske dwara bheje gaye message ko read karne wali hai. Uska dil zoron se dhadakne laga jab usne typing dekha aur uske baad message aya.

" Abhi to main tumhe theek se janti tak nahi, never saw your face.. Tumhare uppar shaq hota hai mujhe, kahin tum fake to nahi? " shruti ne jaise hi message pada use samajh aya ki usne jald bazi kar di hai.

" Fake hota to tumhare bare mein itna sab malum hota? "

" Kya pata, show me your photo tab mujhe yakeen hoga ki tum hamare hi college ke ho? tumne apni profile tak hide kar rakhi hai "

" Chehre ka kya karogi? Mene tumhe sabse behtarin chiz dikhai hai.. Mujhe malum hai ki ye dekhne ke baad tumhari chut mein ek dum se kulbulahat hui hogi isliye tumhari bechaini badh rahi hai aur tum mujhe dekhna chahti ho " shruti ne message send kar dia. Samne se typinig likha hua aya par fir screen se hatt gaya. Shruti muskura di usne fauran message kiya " Tumhare andar ki aag isi se theek ho sakti hai, jannat ka ehsas milega... socho abhi kache ke andar hai jab uske bahar dekhogi to kya haal hoga tumhara " shruti ne send kiya aur fir kuch soch kar aur likhne lagi " soch kar hi gili ho gayi ho na ? to ab ye socho ki dekh kar kitna hogi? " itna message karke usne ek pal nahi lagaya aur facebook logout kar diya.

What an amazing story harshit1890
Started following this thread a few days ago. Aur yaha Tak jitne bhi updates padhe hai... mere dimag ke parkhachhe udd chuke hai... Matlb is story me bahut kuchh hai... Horror, comedy, hostel Life (jisko pdhke lga ki Kaash mai bhi hostel Life jee pata), and ab to lg rha hai ki isske peechhe bahut tagdi scheming hai. Ho skta hai... Nhi bhi ho skta... Saala bheja fry horela hai.
After reading so many updates.... I have become a fan of the way jis tarah se aapne itni detailing ke sath plotting ki hai. For eg aarohi ka jis tarah se mansion me kisiko dekhna... Aur fir kuchh dino baad uska uss mansion ki khidki se bahar dekhna, it's mind-boggling.
Pehle Mera shaq ms nandini pe bhi hua tha, lekin fir se alok ka statement ki wo itni bhalai kaise kr rhi hai aarohi ki.... Ye confusion create krta hai.
So many questions man!
A new fan in your fanbase..tc