Fantasy " Girls Hostel " { Completed }

[harshit1890]

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Chapter 1 ~~ " Supriya "​

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Chapter ~~ 2 " The Illusion "​

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Chapter ~~ 3 " Catatonic Schizophrenia " ​

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Chapter ~~ 4 " A True Face "​

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Chapter ~~ 5 " The Antiquarian "​

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Chapter ~~ 6 " The Amazon "​

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Finale Chapter 7 : " Book Of Hoax "​

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सच में , यह पुरी स्टोरी दिमाग के परखच्चे उड़ाए जा रही है । कभी लगता है कहानी में सस्पेंस है तो कभी लगता है भ्रम जाल का ताना-बाना बुना हुआ है तो कभी लगता है जैसे कोई रूहानी ताकतें हैं तो कभी लगता है यह सिंपल स्टोरी है जिसमें आरूहि एक गम्भीर बिमारी से पीड़ित है ।

मुझे लगता है इससे बेहतरीन कहानी फिलहाल तो इस फोरम पर नहीं है । और सबसे बड़ी खासियत है आपके लिखने का स्टाइल और अंदाज । आउटस्टैंडिंग हर्षित भाई ।

thoos thoos ke khana khaya aaruhi ne jo ekdam majedar horror type scene tha ..

सही में , हर्षित भाई ! मुझे बहुत ही दया आने लगा है आरूहि पर । अगर किसी हरामखोर की वजह से उसकी हालत ऐसी हुई है तो उसे जहन्नुम का रास्ता जरूर दिखला दिजियेगा ।

WTF!!! Yahi pehla reaction nikalta hai is kahani ko poora padhne ke baad... Halanki pehle bhi maine is kahani ke kuchh 7-8 updates padhe huye the par jab is baar padhna shuru kiya to ek naya sa romanch har beet te update ke saath banta gaya... Bohot hi zyada behatreen tareeke se likhi gayi kahani hai ye, ab jis prakaar ka plot imagine kiya hai lekhak saahab ne uske baad ek nausikhiya bhi likhe to bhi kahani halki nahi ho sakti, aur yahaan jis level ka narration, aur scene specialization hame padhne ko mila hai, wo kaafi hai dikhane ke liye that this is, without a doubt,one of the finest stories available on XF... Chahe wo running stories hon ya fir completed, aur chahe future mein likhi jaane waali kahaniyan, is story ka ek alag hi sthaan bana rehne waala hai forum par... Aur iske liye writer saahab ki jitni bhi tareef ki jaaye wo kam hi hogi...

Fantasy genre ke saath shuru huyi ye kahani, kab alag - alag genres ke darshan karane lagi padhte waqt katayi pata nahi chala... Horror, Suspense, Thriller, Adventure, Romance and of course Fantasy, aur saath hi mein Erotica ke ansh bhi... Ek story mein is se zyada kis cheez ki apeksha kar sakta hai reader!? Again, one of the best stories I've ever read... Outstanding Stuff harshit1890 bhai...

Kya hi khubsurat kahani likhi hai aapne bhai... I'm just speechless, jitni bhi tareef karunga kam hi hogi... Erotica ka bhi bilkul sahi situation mein use Kiya gaya hai aur sabse important har kirdaar par lekhak ki shaandar pakad bani rahi hai... Har character ka kahani mein hona justify kiya gaya hai, kahin bhi koyi bhi character bina matlab nahi ghus aaya...

Ab dekhna ye hai ke Mehta waali meeting mein kaun kaun shaamil tha aur unka maksad kya tha? Aur Shruti is sab ki sachayi jaan bhi paayegi ya nahi? Aruhi sach mein kisi beemari ka shikaar hai ya kewal naatak kar rahi hai? At last, Ek baar ko apun ko ye bhi laga ke asal mein ye sab jo ho raha hai wo kewal Shruti ki kalpana hai...

Outstanding Story & Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...

Harshit bhai... Kayi horror stories padhi hain maine, joki poori tarah se horror genre par based hain but jis tarah ka scene aap create karte ho, taking into note ye story horror genre par based hai bhi nahi, that's phenomenal...

meghnath naam rakhne ke pichhe ki kahani bhi majedar hai ..
jab me TV nahi dekhta( waise tha nahi nahi ghar par ) tha bachpan me aur bas naam suna karta tha to khudko SHAKTI KAPOOR. kehta tha dosto ke bich ..ye kissa padhke bachpan ki yaade taaza ho gayi ..

Slowly my interest is increasing towards the story full of adventure, fun to read, no doubt you are a great writer, thank you for writing such a beautiful story.

Have to admit, your story completely twists the thinking, sometimes it seems in the mind that it is just a disease and sometimes it seems like something supernatural. Your writing is commendable, even after writing this much there are many questions and there will be many such points which I have missed. In some scenes there was a combination of intensity as well as erotic scenes, which you have shown very well, what should I say now, now the words of praise are over understand my feelings.
harshit1890 Hats Off... enjoyed it.

but why were you making her nude everytime in front of everyone.

मुझे नहीं लगता दुनिया में कोई भी ऐसा माई का माल होगा जिसे इस कहानी की पहेली समझ में आ रही हो। गजब का दिमाग हिला रखा है आपने हर्षित भाई।

The whole incident, that Mansion one was written so beautifully that no words are sufficient to describe it! Ismein koyi doraye nahin ki maine aaj tak kisi ko bhi is tarah ka horror likhte nahi dekha hai... Haunted ko read kiya tha maine, kaafi pehle, aur main bilkul daave se keh sakta hoon, that you're the best,when it comes to generating real fear in readers, while they read the story..

Bhatt the phakk is this estory?

 

[Naina]

are harsit saheb update de dijiye.. Waiting

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

Btw thanks back to back teen update dene ke liye

तीन अपडेट ? वाह !

 

[harshit1890]

jahan tak hum sabhi ko pata hai supriya megha ki tarah brave nahi hai... to ghar na jaane ki wajah??
Khooni wohi hai??? Aur khoon karni hai
Oh common... ab yeh bahana to hargiz nahi ho sakta ki hostel life enjoy karni hai wo bhi aisi situation pe..

50 - 50 chances hai.... ki murder karne wali supriya hi hai...aur jo bhi ghatanaye ho rahi recently uske piche bhi bhi wohi hai.. ya phir koi aur jo supriya ke jariye ye sab kar raha hai..

Wah re megha THE THARKI RANI sapne bhi bas tharak hi chadhe
waise uska achha hai.. tension lene ka nahi dene ka... khao piyo so jao aiysh karo mauj karo phir so jao
Phir wohi phone call.. aare koun hai ye namuna jo raat ke 3 baje call kar kar ke log ko disturb karta hai... aur koi kaam dhaam nahi hai kya

khidki ke piche.....

ab ki baar girls toilet ke pipe chori karne aayi hogi

alle aalle ye to supriya ko hi aankhein dikha raha hai...
ab ispe Supriya be like




yaar is megha ko kuch bhi farak nahi padta kya
matlab itni careless.... aur direct jaake khirdi khol ke dekh bhi li matlab andhera mahol hai... kuch darr naam ki chij hi nahi usme... had hai... Haan par tharakpan creepy mahol mein bhi jag jaaye ye jarur pakki baat hai... upor se raat ka mahol.. baat baaki hai, nind baaki hai, sapna baaki hai, are sapne mein tharakpan bhi baaki aur abhi to raat bhi baaki hai
wah kya mast sulaying supriya ko.. lodi ki jarurat hi nahi....
Btw agar sachme koi taank jhank kar raha ya rahi thi.. taank jhank karne wala ya wali dhokhebaz, dagabaaz, kamina kamini, kulta, behaya, besharm, bewafa, begairat, insects lober, tharki aur hawas ke pujari-pujaran character tha ya thi..
are ye taank jhank karne wali ya wala kahi jaake chhullu bhar pani mein dub ke kyun nahi mar jata
Khair....
1) sukriya dil se jo tanu kaise mari usko full details mein dikhane ki koshish ki aapne jisme aap poorn roop se kamyab rahe... waise aur bhi khaufnaak manjar create kar sakte the
2) kaafi creepy aur scary mahol taiyar kiya hai aapne khaskar us room mein...
really aise mahol aap hi create kar sakte hai isliye to aap horror stories ke king ho bole to



well let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills harshit ji

megha is selfish... use jo sahi laga usne kiya aur jis halat mein supriya thi aur hostel ki life ko dekho to bahut sahi choices hain uski... lekin apne jo chudail aur joker wali photo dali hai vo comendable job hai Jitni galiyan apne ek line mein likhi hai gazaabbb.... Han vo usko marte hue dikhana thoda sa justify kar gaya na... Apko bhi padne ko mil gaya... Thanks nainaji

Ya to kaatil 1)supriya hai
Ya phir 2) koi bhootni
Ya phir 3) ya koi insaan jo supriya ke kandhe pe bandhuk rakhke chala rahi hai...

ya fir 4

और भी रिसर्च करना होगा... ये हर्षित भाई की स्टोरी है ।
मैने देखा बहुत लोग स्टोरी पढ़ने आ रहे हैं... देखते हैं उनकी क्या राय है ?

bahut log kahan aa rahe hain

Wo jelebi ki tarah baat ko gol gol jawab denge .... aur kya

तो हम दोनों किस लिए है ?
हम दोनों हैं न आप के ही शब्दों में " सभी की ऐसी की तैसी करने की " । वो लोग आप से और मुझ से थोड़ी न होशियार है ।
और हर्षित भाई भी तो है ही हमारे साथ ।

Main...

1) oh to ye baat hai... supriya ko megha se pyar hai
matlab samajh rahe ho na
lesbo pong ah ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha
ufff dil mein aag si jal uthi jab ushe pata chala ki megha to bas us harami Akash se pyar karti hai.. isliye is dukh aur dard ke ghadi mein masturbation karne lag gayi...
2) us tute fute room mein jaane ke baad, saare chijo aur baaton ko gaur karne ke baad ushe laga ki jo kand hua hai wo dimagi upaj nahi balki sach hai..
aur isi khushi mein masturbation karne lag gayi
ye supriya jarur us haramkhor vikrant ki cheli hai definitely

3) ab aate hai creepy bhootiya mahol pe..
yeh jo us room se leke hostel tak supriya ke sath jo insaan ya bhootni game khel rahi thi lukan chupai ki wo koi aur balki wo...

wo yahi hai
Actually us bhootni ko madad chahiye petrol chori karte waqt isliye supriya se madad maangne aayi thi.. par yeh supriya thehri pagal... dar ke maare idhar udhar bhagti phir rahi thi
are paas jaake puch leti ki haan ji, kya taklif hai ju ko

4) ab writer sahab ne yahan puri ghatana ke sath sath scene ko hi badal diya..kahe
matlab abhi tak supriya kisi bhootiya hostel ke andar fanshi huyi thi.. aur ye jitne bhi hostel ke kirdaar hai... ye sab bas uske mann ka baham hai...
par waha pahunchi kaise
gharwalo ko pata nahi hai kya ki unki beti kisi bhootiya girls hostel mein rehkar padhayi continue kar rahi hai..
matlab megha as a tharki bhootni thi aur tanu as a Nashedi bhootni
Khair.. Mujhe kya...
tulsi is sanshar ke bhaanti bhaanti ke log.. oppss sorry matlab bhoot
Khair let's see what happens next
Actually there is another story inside the story. there are many surprising dramatic twists in the story which are absolutely shocking.
abhi is natakiya mod ko hi dekh lijiye maybe whole story ko hi badal ke rakh de
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills harshit ji

supriya ke niyat aur uske character pr shaq.... apne use to badal kar rakh dia hai... tht scene .. tht update is the most important and tricky one....acha hai jo aapne samjha hai aisach hi samajh kar rehna.
Petrol chudail kain dikhe to batana bada mehnga hai.....
Abhi sirf scene moda hai..uspar chatta.. acha hai acha hai
apne akhri mein jo tarif ki hai vo humka pasand ayi.. Thanks naina ji

readers kyun akele mein padhe update ko... na aaj bata hi dijiye ki akele mein kyun padhe
goosebumps ka to pata nahi haan itna jarur jaan gayi hoon ki ye supriya ko megha se pyar hai wo bhi dil ke gahrayio se... aur usse bhi badi baat ye kamini supriya us haramkhor vikrant ki cheli hai definitely

akele mein baith kar likhte hue us scene ko create karna aur fir character ki jagah khud ko rakh kar likhna... made me goosebumps... bec andhera chahe ghar mei hi ho dar wahan bhi lagta hai... tht is why

Kahi wo bhootni ke haramkhor tharki vikrant to nahi jo ye sab kand kar raha tha

Btw thanks back to back teen update dene ke liye

Bas samay mil jata hai to hath nahi rukte

jab bhi aapki stories read karu ye epic aur legendary gana/kavita yaad aaye... actually prerna deti hai ju ke story ke lead characters... ki chaahe saamne jitni bhi muskilein ho chaahe koi sath na de lekin kabhi haarna nahi hai... never back down, never give up... har muskil ko paar kar aage badhni hai manjil ki aurr...

Jo kaam mein nahi kar pata ya fir kosish karta hun vo apni imagination mein daal deta hun. Thanks naninaji...

Full horror plot par la ke chhoda hai,


BRILLIANT

Thanks bhai

nice update ..maja aa gaya .

Thanks bhai

 

[Naina]

supriya ke niyat aur uske character pr shaq.... apne use to badal kar rakh dia hai... tht scene .. tht update is the most important and tricky one....acha hai jo aapne samjha hai aisach hi samajh kar rehna.
Petrol chudail kain dikhe to batana bada mehnga hai.....
Abhi sirf scene moda hai..uspar chatta.. acha hai acha hai

I blame tharki vikrant

 

[Naina]

in ghatanao ke piche kahi wo besharam tharki malini ki ruh to nahi...

 

[Naina]

waise abhi harshit saheb jaan chuke hai ki is baar supriya ki band bajne wali hai
is baar pur jor koshish karenge us supriya masoom dikhane ke liye

 

[Naina]

in ghatanao ke piche kahi wo besharam tharki malini ki ruh to nahi...

Nahi..
Actually meera chorni ki ruh hai... coz wo thodi bahot pagal bhi thi... abhi uski psycho ruh ye sab kar rahi ho

 

[Naina]

bahut log kahan aa rahe hain

Kayi baar puchne par bhi aapne mana kar diya...
ab bhi waqt hai.. bula lu kuch readers ko

 

[Naina]

तीन अपडेट ? वाह !

Last wale update mein kaafi khatarnak twist hai...
Btw maine kal raat 3am baje ke baad read ki hai..
par dar to hargiz nahi lekin haan jigyasa jarur hai.. aur wo bhi had se zyada... ki akhir ye hua kaise... Kal se soch soch ishi baat ko leke pareshan hoon ki kya guess karu is situation par..

 

[harshit1890]

I blame tharki vikrant

in ghatanao ke piche kahi wo besharam tharki malini ki ruh to nahi...

Pichli kahani ko kabhi nahi bhulti aap

waise abhi harshit saheb jaan chuke hai ki is baar supriya ki band bajne wali hai
is baar pur jor koshish karenge us supriya masoom dikhane ke liye

Aisa is baar hua to naam badal lunga...

Nahi..
Actually meera chorni ki ruh hai... coz wo thodi bahot pagal bhi thi... abhi uski psycho ruh ye sab kar rahi ho

Kayi baar puchne par bhi aapne mana kar diya...
ab bhi waqt hai.. bula lu kuch readers ko

Matlab hi nahi hai... readers kabhi bulaye nahi jatte madam... vo khud khinchte hain.. kahani mein power honi chahie ... vo to Sanju bhai ne kaha bhut log ane wale hai to mene pucha kaun log kyun ki mein samjha hi nahi ki vo baat kahan se ayi....

Last wale update mein kaafi khatarnak twist hai...
Btw maine kal raat 3am baje ke baad read ki hai..
par dar to hargiz nahi lekin haan jigyasa jarur hai.. aur wo bhi had se zyada... ki akhir ye hua kaise... Kal se soch soch ishi baat ko leke pareshan hoon ki kya guess karu is situation par..

aap doctor log darte hi nahi ho... main aaj us twist ke uppar se parda hata deta lekin aaj samay nahi mil paya ... ab dekhta hun hopefully kal tak de dun.. Vaise bhi corona itna badhing samajh nahi ata garibi kab jayegi