Fantasy " Girls Hostel " { Completed }

[harshit1890]

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Chapter 1 ~~ " Supriya "​

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Chapter ~~ 5 " The Antiquarian "​

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Chapter ~~ 6 " The Amazon "​

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Finale Chapter 7 : " Book Of Hoax "​

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Some Comments for this story (Late Add-on )

सच में , यह पुरी स्टोरी दिमाग के परखच्चे उड़ाए जा रही है । कभी लगता है कहानी में सस्पेंस है तो कभी लगता है भ्रम जाल का ताना-बाना बुना हुआ है तो कभी लगता है जैसे कोई रूहानी ताकतें हैं तो कभी लगता है यह सिंपल स्टोरी है जिसमें आरूहि एक गम्भीर बिमारी से पीड़ित है ।

मुझे लगता है इससे बेहतरीन कहानी फिलहाल तो इस फोरम पर नहीं है । और सबसे बड़ी खासियत है आपके लिखने का स्टाइल और अंदाज । आउटस्टैंडिंग हर्षित भाई ।

thoos thoos ke khana khaya aaruhi ne jo ekdam majedar horror type scene tha ..

सही में , हर्षित भाई ! मुझे बहुत ही दया आने लगा है आरूहि पर । अगर किसी हरामखोर की वजह से उसकी हालत ऐसी हुई है तो उसे जहन्नुम का रास्ता जरूर दिखला दिजियेगा ।

WTF!!! Yahi pehla reaction nikalta hai is kahani ko poora padhne ke baad... Halanki pehle bhi maine is kahani ke kuchh 7-8 updates padhe huye the par jab is baar padhna shuru kiya to ek naya sa romanch har beet te update ke saath banta gaya... Bohot hi zyada behatreen tareeke se likhi gayi kahani hai ye, ab jis prakaar ka plot imagine kiya hai lekhak saahab ne uske baad ek nausikhiya bhi likhe to bhi kahani halki nahi ho sakti, aur yahaan jis level ka narration, aur scene specialization hame padhne ko mila hai, wo kaafi hai dikhane ke liye that this is, without a doubt,one of the finest stories available on XF... Chahe wo running stories hon ya fir completed, aur chahe future mein likhi jaane waali kahaniyan, is story ka ek alag hi sthaan bana rehne waala hai forum par... Aur iske liye writer saahab ki jitni bhi tareef ki jaaye wo kam hi hogi...

Fantasy genre ke saath shuru huyi ye kahani, kab alag - alag genres ke darshan karane lagi padhte waqt katayi pata nahi chala... Horror, Suspense, Thriller, Adventure, Romance and of course Fantasy, aur saath hi mein Erotica ke ansh bhi... Ek story mein is se zyada kis cheez ki apeksha kar sakta hai reader!? Again, one of the best stories I've ever read... Outstanding Stuff harshit1890 bhai...

Kya hi khubsurat kahani likhi hai aapne bhai... I'm just speechless, jitni bhi tareef karunga kam hi hogi... Erotica ka bhi bilkul sahi situation mein use Kiya gaya hai aur sabse important har kirdaar par lekhak ki shaandar pakad bani rahi hai... Har character ka kahani mein hona justify kiya gaya hai, kahin bhi koyi bhi character bina matlab nahi ghus aaya...

Ab dekhna ye hai ke Mehta waali meeting mein kaun kaun shaamil tha aur unka maksad kya tha? Aur Shruti is sab ki sachayi jaan bhi paayegi ya nahi? Aruhi sach mein kisi beemari ka shikaar hai ya kewal naatak kar rahi hai? At last, Ek baar ko apun ko ye bhi laga ke asal mein ye sab jo ho raha hai wo kewal Shruti ki kalpana hai...

Outstanding Story & Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...

Harshit bhai... Kayi horror stories padhi hain maine, joki poori tarah se horror genre par based hain but jis tarah ka scene aap create karte ho, taking into note ye story horror genre par based hai bhi nahi, that's phenomenal...

meghnath naam rakhne ke pichhe ki kahani bhi majedar hai ..
jab me TV nahi dekhta( waise tha nahi nahi ghar par ) tha bachpan me aur bas naam suna karta tha to khudko SHAKTI KAPOOR. kehta tha dosto ke bich ..ye kissa padhke bachpan ki yaade taaza ho gayi ..

Slowly my interest is increasing towards the story full of adventure, fun to read, no doubt you are a great writer, thank you for writing such a beautiful story.

Have to admit, your story completely twists the thinking, sometimes it seems in the mind that it is just a disease and sometimes it seems like something supernatural. Your writing is commendable, even after writing this much there are many questions and there will be many such points which I have missed. In some scenes there was a combination of intensity as well as erotic scenes, which you have shown very well, what should I say now, now the words of praise are over understand my feelings.
harshit1890 Hats Off... enjoyed it.

but why were you making her nude everytime in front of everyone.

मुझे नहीं लगता दुनिया में कोई भी ऐसा माई का माल होगा जिसे इस कहानी की पहेली समझ में आ रही हो। गजब का दिमाग हिला रखा है आपने हर्षित भाई।

The whole incident, that Mansion one was written so beautifully that no words are sufficient to describe it! Ismein koyi doraye nahin ki maine aaj tak kisi ko bhi is tarah ka horror likhte nahi dekha hai... Haunted ko read kiya tha maine, kaafi pehle, aur main bilkul daave se keh sakta hoon, that you're the best,when it comes to generating real fear in readers, while they read the story..

Bhatt the phakk is this estory?

 

[nain11ster]

interesting hoti jaa rahi hai kahani....
Parchayi jo dikhi wo waham thi yaa fir wo bhootni....aur aisa lag raha hai Bhootni help karne wali hai iss Supriya ki.....
Mobile uss room se paka gayab ho chukka hoga aur Warden ko kahi girra milla hoga yaa aisa kuch

Parchhayi jo dikhi wo vaham thi ya fir bhootni uska pata yahan par reality se rahne par hoga... Why ju bhoot ya parchhayi ho gaye

 

[Naina]

A reader which is not forgetable U r the best reader XF has found...

Thank you..

Bas bhai roo mat.. aage ke liye bacha kar rakho apne ansu... Kaam ayegi... Bahut jada sakht jaan hai vo...

kya nainu saheb sach mein ro rahe the
Nainu sahab Tussi na ro.... abhi kayi kirdaar baaki hai, baat baaki hai

 

[nain11ster]

Haha wo megha ke sath busy hai dono phone per hi ghapa ghap ker rhy h

Ye sab sajis hai hariya kaka ki.... Jaisa ki apna ek mitr kahte Mr. BERLIN kahte hain...

Ghode ko mil na rahi ghas aur gadhe kha rahe chavanprash ... Bus hariya kaka wahi karne par utaru hain

 

[Naina]

Shut up ... Arohi ke sath iss baar Hariya kaka taanka bhida rahe ... Jo megha ke sath na kar paye..

BTW abhi tanu ki maut ek aisi ladki ne dekhi hai jo 4 din se hostel me ja kar so rahi ... Arohi...

Might bhi 8 sal pahle uski maut hui ho... Aur wo kalpna me kahani bun rahi aur kahani ke taar jod rahi hai... It might be kahin kisi mod par Supriya aur Megha se mulakat ho... Don't be so pridict...

Writers sahab ne illusion aur reality ke bich ek complete loop diya hai jisme poorane sabhi mukhya patr ke sath 3 baten hui hi...

1) kisi ek ki maut aur kuchh logon ka pagal ho jana..

2) Ya fir kisi ki maut nahi sab ko writer sahab ne pagalpan ka hawa laga diya...

3) Sab mare hain ye aap ka illusion hai... San jinda hai wo aap ka illusion hai...

So dear ... Jis illusion ka illustration na ho wahsn bas aaram se padhte rahne ka

Story harshit1890 sahab ki hai.... aur unki kahani matlab ek ek karke sabhi kirdaaro ka patta saaf ho jana hamesha hamesha ke liye... wo bhi khaufnaak tarike se...
Aap maano ya na maano... yahi harsu saheb ki siggi hai aur writing style bhi
Edited - oh haan, chahe illusion ho ya hallucinations ya 8 saal pehle ki baat ho ya present ki.... isse koi farak nahi padta writer sahab ko... kissa khatam to sabhi kirdaaro ka hona hi hona hai hain na harshit sahab

 

[nain11ster]

Thank you..

kya nainu saheb sach mein ro rahe the
Nainu sahab Tussi na ro.... abhi kayi kirdaar baaki hai, baat baaki hai

Dimag par parda hi dala hai.... Thik se padh leyo.... Ek to 15 min laha diye ek jawab dene me ... Pichhe se dnudh laye rona na rone wala post... Mera rona na hoga ki ju to poora gaanv ki terhvi manane par utaru ho... Read carefully..

Harshit saheb wrote... Nahi maregi wo ... Bahut shakt jaan hai... Dhyan do padhne me naina ... Kisi kisi ka hi number aayega but ju ko lagega ki sabka aa gaya...

Kyonki ju illusion me ho... Bharm jaal

 

[Naina]

Dimag par parda hi dala hai.... Thik se padh leyo.... Ek to 15 min laha diye ek jawab dene me ... Pichhe se dnudh laye rona na rone wala post... Mera rona na hoga ki ju to poora gaanv ki terhvi manane par utaru ho... Read carefully..

Harshit saheb wrote... Nahi maregi wo ... Bahut shakt jaan hai... Dhyan do padhne me naina ... Kisi kisi ka hi number aayega but ju ko lagega ki sabka aa gaya...

Kyonki ju illusion me ho... Bharm jaal

Let's see what happens next

 

[Mahi Maurya]

Ek lekhika hain Mahi Maurya ji ... Unse bus 2 baar baat hui aur kahani me "Bang-Bang" romance ka mujhe nayak bana diya gaya... Idhar to sala apan kisi ke sapne me bhi nahi ...

अरे सर जी काहे लिए हमका बदनाम करत बाटे।

हम तो आपका स्टेटस बतावत रहे। और आपका किरदार लोगन को ख़ूबहि पसंद आ रहल बा। बहुत तारीफ होत है आपके। सभहि आप के जैसा बनइ चाहत बाटे।।

आपको तो खुश होना चाहिए। हमने आपको कहाँ से कहाँ पहुँचा दिया सर जी।

 

[nain11ster]

Story harshit1890 sahab ki hai.... aur unki kahani matlab ek ek karke sabhi kirdaaro ka patta saaf ho jana hamesha hamesha ke liye... wo bhi khaufnaak tarike se...
Aap maano ya na maano... yahi harsu saheb ki siggi hai aur writing style bhi

Hateli writing style me storyline naam ki chij bhi hoti hai ki nahi... Jab harshit babu bol chuke... No physco thrill... No paranormal activities... Then why don't u accept and ready for a complete illusive web story... Jaisa ki mujhe feel ho raha hai... No prediction... Soch'kar aane wale chijon ka maza na kharab karna..

Waise bhi sab mat jayenge to ek ek karke sab ke shrad ka bhoj bhi khaunga aur tumhe bhi pick up kiye chalunga... Raste bhar u tease me dekha main sahi thi ... Aur main bewakoofon sa chhoti shakal banakar chidhta rahunga... Ander hi ander...

Happy na... Haan par marne do shrad ka bhoj khane chalenge

 

[Naina]

Hateli writing style me storyline naam ki chij bhi hoti hai ki nahi... Jab harshit babu bol chuke... No physco thrill... No paranormal activities... Then why don't u accept and ready for a complete illusive web story... Jaisa ki mujhe feel ho raha hai... No prediction... Soch'kar aane wale chijon ka maza na kharab karna..

Waise bhi sab mat jayenge to ek ek karke sab ke shrad ka bhoj bhi khaunga aur tumhe bhi pick up kiye chalunga... Raste bhar u tease me dekha main sahi thi ... Aur main bewakoofon sa chhoti shakal banakar chidhta rahunga... Ander hi ander...

Happy na... Haan par marne do shrad ka bhoj khane chalenge

Khair...
Let's see what happens next

harshit1890 sahab

 

[harshit1890]

Sarre waiting karne walle padhne walle mitr.. pandemic ke chalte.. har chiz late deliver ho ri hai.. jisme mera luck bi include hai

Umeed hai friday tak wapsi krenge... Girls hostel ab romanachak phase mei le jayegi... Jaldi hi milunga...